Rogaine

There is no point to this at all, other than needing a little exercise coz it's been so long. If I could write 2-3 more verses it might actually be a song.



Why I feel azz if
My baby beatin' me up??
She spoutin' riff
I'm holdin' empty cup
She be blazin'
An I'm grazin'
Like I ain't even due
The first clue.

Man, whass up??
Can't get my head up
She rock 'n roll
I'm stuck inna hole
She my baby girl
But I swear Ima hurl
If she keep lappin' me
Wid all dat rappin'

Man i'm slummin'
But now she hummin'
Like Fredric Cho-pain
Ima rub some Rogaine
On my flat head
My brain must be dead
Gotta dump some rhyme
'Fore I run outa time...

Baby it's diss
I just need a kiss.

Dat's all.

Dats okay.Dis is all gots to say.

Tanks

Hahah Doug..
No, Moon this for being an excersises actually does have strong meaning and potential. (Im pretty sure I know what it's about, it seems fairly explanatory but I'd rather you explain first so I don't make myself look foolish) But mannn this is a funny one as well;

"Man i'm slummin'
But now she hummin'
Like Fredric Cho-pain
Ima rub some Rogaine
On my flat head"

Aaha ^ so funny bro. And I'm ok with saying that cuz it feels you were going for that in a sense?

omg......Mooooon no you didn't!

but i think you need to redo it as a parody sweetie and the title that you picked should have clued you! Idk how you missed it
so now i wanna see you rewrite it to fit this meter

If you wanna hang out
you've got to take her out
(rogaine)
If you wanna get down
down on the ground
(rogaine)
She don't lie
she don't lie
she don't lie
(rogaine)

If you got bad news
you wanna kick them blues
(rogaine)
When your day is done
and you wanna run
(rogaine)
She don't lie
she don't lie
she don't lie
(rogaine)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dRCkWsoJzZo
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Yeh, why does everything have to be so serious? I like the trueness and humor of this, Moon! It's fun and good.
It's like, "Hey, babe, slow down. You be makin' me dizzy" !!!

@smoothtung, ya go ahead and speak ur mind bcs i know that this is so totally not-serious that its almost "not-funny" but i'm gonna be laughing about this all week

Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine

"Hey, babe, slow down. You be makin' me dizzy" !!!

I like the short lines. They are a relief after some of the long, drawn out stuff on other forums.
Jim

When you get
Backstage
She's only
Half your age
Rogaine
She don't lie
She don't lie
She don't lie
Rogaine

^-^ ok ok I'll try to rewrite it over the weekend coz yeah it does look like I missed the obvious on a couple of angles...

Frankie, yep, "fun" is what it's all about

Jim, yeah I was defo going for "clippy" here, just to be contrary

Doug, I just may steal some or all of that in a rewrite!

Gonna leave the original, just add a new version....

Thanks for reading and commenting peeps!

PS: Tessie girl you may not be laughing anymore after it's all over

Well,all your fans are patiently waiting for your promised rewrite!!Come on,Moon,get off the spoon,and serve up some more Rogaine!!Or are you in full eclipse?We gots ta have MORE!!!

You need a fix
You're in full-eclipse
Rogaine
Your name is Moon
You're on the spoon
Rogaine
She don't lie
She don't lie
She don't lie
Rogaine

^-^ So sorry, I've been twisting and turning all week. And this is just a fly-by... I should be able to spend some time on this at work over the weekend

i should add that Moon aggravated a back injury earlier this week and i've "ordered" him (yes i CAN do that lol) to cut his computer time drastically and thats one reason why he has been so slow to get back to this, but Doug i have to say thanks for all of your great recommendations

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...tml#post964928



I tend to work best when I'm in pain, all messed up in the head, and at work.