Dont let me surrender

Verse 1
Everybody's empty
Everybody's fake
I feel I got nothing left
Iv got nothing left to say

So don't leave me here alone now
I don't want to feel the pain
I can't stop thinking about you
Cause you take it all away

You've always been there for me
Your never far away
Your the only one
Who will ever know my pain

Chorus
I feel it's time to end this
To raise the white flag now
So don't let me surrender
Dont let me drown

Verse 2
You've been there for me forever
Your always there to numb the pain
You help me through hard times
Never let me fade away

When I'm about to end it
When I can't take life anymore
You come and pick me up
Up off the floor

Chorus
I feel it's time to end this
To raise the white flag now
So don't let me surrender
Dont let me drown

Chorus
I feel it's time to end this
To raise the white flag now
So don't let me surrender
Dont let me drown

Very heavy.I thought you may want to hear this:

So don't let me surrender
Don't let me drown
To raise the white flag now
Don't let me down

Just couldn't resist rhyming when I saw the opportunity!!Good song,rock on!!

Thanks... I didn't notice that before... I might change one part to be like that.. Thanks again

I'm glad you like it,I'm sure the Poetry gods whispered that in my ear,but meant it for you.

Although you have posted this song again and I have commented on it as well, now that I read it again, I like it even more. Though, to be honest, I have to disagree with Doug, I prefer more the original chorus.

I guess you can't please all the people,all the time.This post hasn't changed,unless it's something I'm not aware of.Sorry Zak,I like the rhyming verse better,so there!