The Fall of the Citadel

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Nice one Zantenian.

But there's one thing I wanna ask.
Is it Can't or Can "we change mentality", cause I find

"If we fear the wrong things,
can we change mentality?"

much more understandable...

I love the four times repetition at the end,good job,Zak!

Originally Posted by Amethystos

Nice one Zantenian.

But there's one thing I wanna ask.
Is it Can't or Can "we change mentality", cause I find

"If we fear the wrong things,
can we change mentality?"

much more understandable...

Amethyste, I used the negative-interrogative form of can for more emphasis. In Greek you might notice the difference easier:

Αν φοβόμαστε τα λάθος πράματα,
Δεν μπορούμε να αλλάξουμε νοοτροπία;

...Obviously, the mentality of some people is one of the wrong things that I mentioned in the song.

Very nice Zakynthos!! (sorryyyy i misspelled your name in my original post)
It flows amazingly well, and i believe another finishing touch is "You're guilty if you give up here." Those are just two of many things that i love about this.

@Amethystos, before i read Zakynthos' response i was gonna say that there is an idiosyncrasy in English whereas "Can't we" is correct, it's like saying "Why can't we" and it's very common to use that form in a situation where we believe that the obvious answer is yes, we can

PS, Zakynthos ofc i think you also explained it perfectly in more technical language