Cosmic Chasm

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  1. Zakynthos said: 08-29-2012 02:23 PM

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    MoonRide*r* said: 08-29-2012 02:59 PM

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    As I read this, my mind keeps seeing an apocalyptic setting, but I know I'm just projecting...

    What do you think about changing the 6th line to "The ground returns a quake"?

    This is one of the best I've ever read in this forum, or anywhere that wasn't bound up in a book. If you're thinking about adding more, that would be great, but I think it's also great as it is!
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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