Now we say our last goodbye
And stare into the eyes
Of what was such a life
As she slips away in time
We remember her days
In our lives
She helped to shape
Who we are
Through ways no one can describe
She gave us strength when we were down
And helped us pick our selves up off the ground
She helped to define who we were inside
Forever will she live
In our hearts
And our minds
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Hi Johnb31, every poem has a story behind, so is a great way you wrote this poem, because let us see it in the way we lived some experiences and apply to our own life and memories. That is how we can share your emotion and understand that someone let a part of her soul into your heart. Thank you
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I was out of town all last week and i have a lot to catch up on! Johnb this is almost as short as the one that i'm about to post but it has so much heart, its really beautiful....and i hope that one day if i ever have to say a last goodbye to someone who means so much to me, that i'll remember the thoughts and feelings that you expressed in this. it's really great as always and thank you for sharing it with us
Music is what feelings sound like
Listen to the Love
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Okay baby,
you never told me what this is about.
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May I add, agreeing with the above comments, that I "heard" this as a song, but then it was over too quickly for a song and I wasn't going to comment. It is a poem, of course, that's the thread. But since I was "hearing" it as a song . . . I wonder if this is not material that could be also put into lyrics somehow? It sounds very personal, so that may not be an option for you. As a poem--great. I, too, want to remember this poem.
. . . Still . . . you might want to consider . . . a song in addition to the poem!
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Every song I write starts as a poem and eventually becomes a song or multiple songs.
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I second you on that , John.
I was for a while wondering whom you meant when referring to "she" though. Well , isn't it obvious.... life.... -
Honk!Honk!Thatsmeinacab!
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I'm so confused about the cab thing.
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I'm not confused about the train thing!
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Haha well it's a long story there, Dougy.
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I said I'm NOT confused!But if you insist.........Do tell.
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Oh in that case my lips are sealed.
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Originally Posted by Thatsmeonthetrain
As long as it's public transport it's OK with me
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Originally Posted by amaryn
I second you on that , John.
I was for a while wondering whom you meant when referring to "she" though. Well , isn't it obvious.... life....
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The she can be what ever you want it to be you can even make it a he it's what ever floats your boat
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"whatever floats your boat"
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Is this the first time you've heard that expression?If it is,do I have a lot to tell you!(Read my posts to find out) Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat
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The answer to your question is No.
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Thank the Lord for that!I was starting to doubt you,just for a second. Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat
