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    Morality
    is a cowards weapon
    used by the old to impress on the young.
    this guilt trip
    is a way of life now,
    buying into the lie, can't tell right from wrong.
    What is wrong with us?
    What will become of us?
    I have had just enough!
    Time to move on ****!

    You can't comprehend
    here's the secret
    I need you to understand!!


    Reality
    is a cowards weapon
    you got one chance to get it all right.
    One life
    is all you have,
    at odds with time till it throws you out.
    We're almost finished!
    The will diminished!
    I cannot take it!
    Now we're out of luck!

    Is it still unclear
    what I want you to do
    open your ears
    Understand!!!

    Mortality
    is a cowards weapon
    the bigger the risk and the harder you fail.
    You're stuck
    a danger junkie
    take my hand before you fall off the rails.
    How much time?
    How much is mine?
    I am so unrefined!
    Now get out of my way!

    Do you get it yet?
    How can I relate?
    Time is short so get to it
    you need to understand!!

    Animosity
    a cowards weapon
    spreading seeds of doubt in the masses mind.
    Once lost
    and never found
    unity binds us we're too strong to fight.
    Now you know the story!
    And know I'm not sorry!
    Do you understand!!

    do you get it?
    Last edited by Tomatomic; 10-25-2012 at 01:38 PM.

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    Hey very cool write but I would sugget title is cowards weapon
    Kathy

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    very deep and very well written.
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside

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    7400 Views?!?Can we get 10,000 by Holloween?
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    OPs lyrics look pretty strong IMO and my guess would be that some posters here including himself possibly may be linking threads or posts from this site somehow to external social media sites which could end up driving a great deal of unexpected traffic our way. . .it's interesting to me just how extremely skilled so many of our millennial-generation posters are at managing the social media, these kids are actually getting hired by Fortune 500 companies nowadays to do just that, i.e., to corral or drive as much internet traffic into a specified destination as possible. It's fascinating actually, and much easier said than done apparently.

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    Yep, got that facebook button right up there at the top.

    Edit: Doug, maybe I should "fb-like" one of my own poems

    Tomatomic: Sing this one like Brian Johnson man, throw some AC/DC into it and I think it would sound great
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    i do not understand how this has so many views. it scared me a bit

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    7600+views,5 replies that's less than one per thousand!Lazy viewers!

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    apparently it needs to be made slightly more viewable. damned lazy people!!!!

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    I do wonder a lot now, and not just because of the high count on this thread but a couple others too, what happens if anyone (whoever that anyone may be) hits that facebook-Like button that's on all of these topics now...
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Who runs the forum they should be able to track it easily from IP addresses.
    Kathy

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    There are lots of cowards in our society, afraid to step outside our morality and to disregard our mortality.

    Jim
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jim Colyer View Post
    There are lots of cowards in our society, afraid to step outside our morality and to disregard our mortality.

    Jim
    Jim,What are you referring to?Please explain!

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