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    Post The Highest Point - Song Made Before I had a Name

    Song Link: http://www.hulkshare.com/6bligfv6io6n

    Details: This was made when I just turned 16, basically this is (in my opinion) the best work I have ever done. I was thinking of using the name 'KoRoyce' but the name held no meaning, the only meaning, if you want to say, it had was to confuse others into thinking it actually had a meaning. Just showing this for review by some of the more intellectual virtues of this forum so I know where my standing was at that time.

    Give me a minute to type the lyrics up I don't have them on paper but I can remember them just by listening.

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    Lyrics:
    Fingers on a band
    mind is on heartbreak
    heart is in the gutter
    plus they still don't know my name
    no one ever gives a dam until the water floods
    so I'ma be like moses,
    I'm gonna water-front
    I'm on a hunt for a girl
    ***** I lied
    mary jane keeps me cummany
    almost every night
    full on armor like a knight
    call me dark
    no knife is in my back
    cause I'm out deep like a shark
    smell the hate like the blood
    I'm swimming so far
    they locked my out of space
    too bright to be a star
    dark star
    I was the kid
    looking out the window of the car
    counting fake stars

    Guilt is a ruthless killer
    I am an assassin
    if it comes to me
    I'm prepared to slash it
    Don't tell me about weakness
    cause I never had it
    keep your mouth shut
    with the problems that you're having
    try to defy
    the doubt
    stuck up in my mind
    that ***** said she was sorry
    I ever even lived life
    I'm sorry that you don't
    appreciate mine
    you don't even gotta say **** to me
    but it'll be alright

    Chorus:
    Cause I go to the highest point in my town
    flick light under grain then I hold it down
    people judge
    but I don't give a ****
    y'all,
    y'all can still mug
    y'all,
    y'all can still mug

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    Usually I don't like alot of pieces on here, posted by people that come on ever so often just leaving petty, self focused works. But I actually enjoyed this. The first verse is unique. Very straight forward (sylobal count is off in spots) but the script is also creative, though doesn't stretch too far as to lose the plot or the 'plan'. Good; solid job for being done when you were only starting out, as you say.

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    Quote Originally Posted by smoothtung View Post
    Usually I don't like alot of pieces on here, posted by people that come on ever so often just leaving petty, self focused works. But I actually enjoyed this. The first verse is unique. Very straight forward (sylobal count is off in spots) but the script is also creative, though doesn't stretch too far as to lose the plot or the 'plan'. Good; solid job for being done when you were only starting out, as you say.
    Thank you man I'm trying my best to get back on the progress I had and even push the limits beyond that, and I usually have to focus on myself because my opinion doesn't count much on others since I have little too say if only through lyrics.

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    accidental double post

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