I see you my girl!!

My english is not good so I hope from you to undestand my poem?? I see you my girl. I see you
my girl, in
everywhere I see you
when I sit in my room and
cry!! Is
You can feel my words?
Can you
Understand my feelings?
I see you in
a sad world, I see you
when
I look at the sky and
when I close
my eyes. I see you in my
darkness room. Your soul
accompany me in my
dreams.
You are my love life
which has lost before that
I find it. You
Here with me everywhere
with my happiness and
sadniss, in my smiles and
tears,
Is
I need to search for
you my girl,
why would I do that and
you
live in my heart, you are
here now
Puting your hand on my
hair
and telling me I love my
baby. When
I feel lonely and suffer a
lot
until I cry, I see you
comes
and sits beside me and
wipes my
sad tears, I do not care
because you let me down
and left me here, I really
do not care
because the happiness
which you
gave it to me, I feel it
now,
it should be so enough
for me. I see you in my
miserable childhood
and see you in my way
which does not
end. I see the beautiful
sadness
in your
brown eyes and your
blond hair
shining from afar like the
sun,
your quiet smile breaks
my
heart and when you
speaks and I hear your
voice
my body melts longing to
you.
I can not forget the first
meeting between us we
walked and talked a lot
and when we got to the
end of road we sat
there and looked
at our eyes, you raised
your hand and wiped on
my
hair I felt that I small
child
want to sleep.‎‏ ‏I love everything you do
and your personality the way that you thinking by...
your style of talk
your silence which
makes me wondering and your soul... O, what can I say
about it, it so beautiful and close to mine.‎
Hope is approach to me touches
my heart and then it go
far away, there are times
my heart embrace low
and fly over the valley we
touches our hands forever
and talk by our thoughts.
I've been dead for 12
years, but your looks
returning me to life, I see
you
now, and I have
feel death so near from
my body, but my spirit
will
never die
never, my beautiful
girl, take my sad soul and
throw it, in the depths of
the sea and let it
drowning and before you
returning to your world,
whispering in my ear and
say
"I love you my baby".

Build a fire a thousand
miles away to light my
long way home
I ride a comet
My trail is long to stay
Silence is a heavy stone...
I fight the world and take
all they can give
There are times my heart
hangs low
Born to walk against the
wind
Born to hear my name
No matter where I stand
I'm alone....By manowar

Dear Dark1979, it's so good to see you writing and sharing again! Your prose-style poetry pulls me gently along, like lapping waves on the seashore.
My! But you have feeling, passion, and love (of which you are also deserving).

"I See You, My Girl" takes the reader many places and times; the ebb and flow of love's rush--then the lack of it, but never without memory of it.
When I read your poems, your style of writing, your expressions, and such strong feeling vastly compensate for any shortcoming in exact English grammar.
Again, sometimes this is the charm of your poetry.

Thank you for sharing this passionate and beautiful poem. I can identify with love so strong that you give everything over to the other person, allowing yourself to become as vulnerable as an infant with that person. All walls that divide you are gone.

And yes, sometimes such memories can even sustain us in hard times, for we all need total love, comfort, and acceptance . . .
Thank you for sharing your poem.

Hi dark1979, as spanish is my first language I know how hard is to try to translate your feelings and thoughts to another language, but some of your ideas are so originals. I know that arab is a so romantic and poetical language, so I think that your poem must be like music in your own language, and the feelings are the same in any language. Thank you for sharing with us, and please continue writing and learning, Ia tik el afie. Ma salama.

Great images,I even envision what your words paint;a beautiful picture!Well done!