How High?

Feeling exceptionally inspired today...
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How far is up?
How high can starlight go?
Is it too much question?
Do I even want to know?
When should I stop
And will I move when you say go?

Thinking I'm tired
Feel like I might be sinking
But I glance at you
And you sweeten what you're thinking
Cut your eyes and smirk
And all over again I'm cooked

A microbe of your smile
Will fly me a country mile
Love's reciprocity
Is my escape velocity
And I fall so high
Into the love light of your eyes

I have so spoiled you
That I even more adore you
But it's cause and effect
You give back more than you get...

So...

Mine is not to ask; How high?
Mine is but to love, and fly.

Mooooooon

I have so spoiled you
That I even more adore you
But it's cause and effect.....
the more we give the better we get
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Hey,Moonie,This is real good!if you turned the third verse into a chorus,well-ah.........A Song!I'm singing this as I write,la la la!Mine is not to ask.How high.Mine is but to love,and fly.La -Leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

Well, Moon, my dear, you have hardly any secrets on ATL. We already know of whom you speak and why. What a good love poem! And you don't have to say it, we already know the source of your inspiration. No, we will never know the depth of your heart, though. We accept that.

I like this so well:

Love's reciprocity
Is my escape velocity
And I fall so high

that I won't refrain myself from saying that for me this poem is named, "Fall So High."

How High?Beyond Heaven!!Dats pretty high ups,I thinks.

Hi MoonRide*r*, all the poem an anthem to love, but there are two phrases that I take in my heart:

first when you use the antithesis:

And I fall so high
Into the love light of your eyes

the last line is what any person in love should, forget all the world around and only say:

Mine is not to ask; How high?
Mine is but to love, and fly.

Congratulations, you are getting better all the time, and you are so high deep in love. Love is the best inspiration.

Hey guys, from Tess and me, and I may leave this same message in 2 or more places: First; thanks a mil, mille gracie, merci-beaucoups-muchissimas (spelling??) for every kind word and suggestion. And segundo; both of us may be out of touch for most of the week, coz we're on the road, having too much fun ... the last hurrah of the summer, so to speak. Tess was trying to keep up yesterday/last night on her cell, but she said that was mildly but repeatedly disastrous, with all the distractions... of the sunny deep south, and I mean Deep south

Best to all, coz all of you are the best!

Grrrrrrrrrrrreat, Moon, as we're allready soaked in autumn,LOL Make it worthwhile and be sure I AM JEALOUS like ****

Tess said she was gonna post a new song lyric (that I forgot to look for first), hinting at things that might make you even more jealous? J/k, but yeah, you can rest assured it was very worthwhile

The more I think about this Title,the more I think it's a Loaded Question!!!!

,................i'm sure that neither Moon nor i even want to ask, loaded in what way

Doug its a love poem and i don't think he had any other intentions for writing it

Originally Posted by Teshka

,................i'm sure that neither Moon nor i even want to ask, loaded in what way

Doug its a love poem and i don't think he had any other intentions for writing it

There you go again!Tee-Hee

I think we need to keep a real close eye on ^ this ^ guy ^.