started bit

I have been really busy working.but started this bit. I will post the final copy up here in a day or two I can feel you slipping away


Slipping away
No longer the same,
Days go by Trying to figure

Filling my head with
Forgotten memories
There's no looking back
Nothings left the same
Since you've gone away

The time still comes, time still comes




I can feel it coming undoing
The walls closing in
Is there anybody there, to save me from
Myself

The time still comes, time still comes



All around me is fading away
I keep coming undoing in the end

This is very different.More like Poetry than Lyrics,but who knows what will change when you rewrite it.I really like it as is.I don't know what will change,be careful,it's already really good!

Thank Doug. I picture this being a accoustic metal song. This is one of those starters that you do not know what people will think so I had to post it first. I am really glad you like it.

i have had great starts but have been getting writers block to finish some. i have like 3 i need to finish but and not think of what comes next.

Thanks for posting that!

What do you mean??

The nonsense bump that you gave in post #4!!!