solve my problems with loving me

Hello all.
Here is a new song of me, it's called "solve my problems with loving me".
I hope you like it, please leave your feedback here.
And as always, please report any english errors :P
i'm a newbie, and i'm 15 years old

solve my problems with loving me


Standing there alone in the corner
I just waited for someone to talk
for someone to play
for someone to enjoy the world
I always watched you when you came along my side
i felt your aura everywhere you walked around
my eyes are following your body babe
every time you look at me
you'll switch me on

I knew that i'll never reach you
but i just couldn't let you go
you'll never noticed me but i always noticed you
You looked at me with a weird face
but i only hoped that you'll solve my problems with loving me


i won myself over to loving you
even though my soul said that you are bad
but i cheated myself
i know that you are not a good for me
but i loved you
I just need somebody to send my heart
so i can't be myself
i knew that i would be in trouble
you always caught me while i looked at you
but I only hoped that you can solve my problems with loving me


I knew that i'll never reach you
but i just couldn't let you go
you'll never noticed me but i always noticed you
You looked at me with a weird face
but i only hoped that you'll solve my problems with loving me

i knew that i'll never reach you
but i just couldn't let you go
you'll never noticed me but i always noticed you
You looked at me with a weird face
but i only hoped that you WOULD solve my problems with loving me
but i only hoped that you WOULD solve my problems with loving me

"Solve My Problems With Loving Me" is a long title, but I certainly love that line in the song! For you to have written this at age 15 and into a language not your first (maybe not even second!) language, is amazing. Did you first write it in a language you're more comfortable with, like German? We've discussed on ATL before how hard it is to translate from one language to another in lyrics. Your meaning comes across clearly, though, even without lots of rhymes.

I want to go over your song a few more times, please, because I like it. And I will be glad to help with the proper tenses, etc. Just give me a few days. If you don't hear from me by Thursday, click on my name, then remind me via a post to my Wall!! [P.S. I used to live in Germany!]

thanks
Yep, i'm from germany, i'm living in germany, and i'm learning english in school ^^
i wrote this song directly in english, i didn't translated this or something like that.

I enjoy this very much! and i want to also say that i identify a great deal with love "solving problems"....just as long as we're careful about who we trust with the most precious part of ourselves....bcs even God said that we should not be alone. i hope you'll continue to write and i look forward to reading more of what youalready posted on here as well

thanks a lot for your wonderful comment!