Amaryn's poems 2012

Thread: Amaryn's poems 2012

Tags: None
  1. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default a human fly

    she was glued against the wall
    not meaning to impress
    waiting for a call
    in s shiny latex dress
    resembling an insect
    sittting in the sun
    not keeping up appearances
    just wishing life was fun
     
  2. Pattmoreira's Avatar

    Pattmoreira said:

    Default

    really, latex dress?
     
  3. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default

    well, lol, this being another observation walking around town, That's life, as Franky Sinatra sings
     
  4. Pattmoreira's Avatar

    Pattmoreira said:

    Default

    It is... but I got your point.
     
  5. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    You duh best,Dude!
     
  6. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default a window

    there is a window , she can see
    a garden with an old birch tree
    her world is frail, still in a mess
    she sometimes whispers one word."stress"

    there is a window, she can smell
    the difference of flowers well
    but when her nightmares reappear
    she wishes someone would be near

    there is a window, she can feel
    the warmth of sunlight , it is real
    that's when she hopes she will go home
    no longer be too long alone
     
  7. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default selfportrait

    the urgency to protest
    brought me closer
    to the seed of creativity

    the nearness of nature
    observing the changing colours
    of the wintergarden
    provoked hidden senses inside me
    to come forward

    making dreams come true
    meant a resounding victory
    for my hazardous adventures
     
  8. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    Selfportrait begs me to ask,"Do you live close to nature?"I ask this because of your often forest references.It shows through your work and I'd be amazed if you couldn't see Trees and Owls through your window.Either that or you've got one heck of an imagination!
     
  9. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default

    well, Doug, in Finland nature is always close, one way or another, but we live in the only big city with 1 million people. A short walk though and we have a rather big forestpark already to enjoy and 1 mile only to the seaside
    Moreover, as a child we moved to a very small village in Holland with almost nothing but forest and farms around us.
    When I lived in Glasgow a bus took me in half an hour to the foot of the Highlands.
     
  10. dark1979's Avatar

    dark1979 said:

    Default

    Unreasonable.
    Definitely‏ ‏Unreasonable!!!! Your Poems are‏ ‏very
    amazing they can touch the
    hearts quickly and
    requisition on the minds!!!! I have read the first poem‏ ‏and
    found myself reading all
    your poems poem by poem, I could not leave without end‏ ‏the reading. Beautiful
    style and diverse too. My dear friend where you been all this long long time????
    Heart of Steel....by manowar
     
  11. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default

    A humble thanks , Dark, it's only three months ago I "discovered" the activity on the Poetry thread and just found the "courage" to put my own here, actually only such I write at the moment.

    But: I keep following also you, Frankie, Tess, Moon, Doug, Zakynthos...it's really a mouthful and very fascinating IMHO
     
  12. dark1979's Avatar

    dark1979 said:

    Default

    Thanks amaryn!! I understand your reply so good but I would love to know if you can understand my reply?? I mean my last reply in adove.
    Heart of Steel....by manowar
     
  13. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1979 View Post
    Thanks amaryn!! I understand your reply so good but I would love to know if you can understand my reply?? I mean my last reply in adove.

    Didn't you ask, where have I been hiding for so long? Well, honestly, I can't come up with a better answer, so - as I said - here I am now,lol
     
  14. Frankie Jasmine's Avatar

    Frankie Jasmine said:

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1979 View Post
    Thanks amaryn!! I understand your reply so good but I would love to know if you can understand my reply?? I mean my last reply in adove.
    Dear DarkOne: To answer your question--Yes, your meaning is perfectly expressed, all but for one word (unreasonable); yet even that word is understandable. Probably the English word you looked for was "unbelievable!" ["unreasonable" actually means it makes no sense--yet we understand you, my friend!] "Unbelievable!" is an exclamation of astonishment!--Something so impressive so as not to seem true or real, but it is true and real! when used in this fashion. Your words are very eloquent, DarkOne.
     
  15. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default Thank you Frankie!

    I think you explained it better than I did. So, yes, Dark must have meant that

    By the way, Dark: it does not mean your command of the English language is not good, my friend! You rock!
     
  16. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default Atl

    jealousy, awkward, ugly and mean
    imminent insinuations between
    lines looking written hidden so well
    - the threat of the ATL

    sheer admiration, tenderness too,
    only a stonethrow away there is you
    stories and words shaped so very well
    - another side of ATL

    each of us posting his beloved songs
    reflecting favourite countries and tongues
    busy bees searching their most wanted smell:
    - it's all part of ATL


    poetry shaping emotions of love
    memories written of lives getting tough
    searching for roads between heaven and hell
    this is our ATL
    Last edited by amaryn; 11-21-2012 at 11:16 PM. Reason: adding a few lines lost during the night:p
     
  17. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default awareness

    brushing your teeth with salt
    at fourty maintaining you're old
    in summerwind feeling cold

    hoping that others will pay
    nothing constructive to say
    loosing too often your way

    obese while being too thin
    feeling alone though a twin
    foodprogrammes doing you in

    all these and many things , true
    are they familiar to you
    tell me now what can you do
    will you surrender- you too?
     
  18. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    You know something;I read Atl right after Model Behavior.Do they have a similar beat or was that just me?I swear,The first two stanzas especially seem to "bounce"the same way;it just rocks along!What do you think?
    AWARENESS:Wow,if I didn't know you better,I'd think you lost your mind;which isn't always a bad thing!"obese while being too thin".......please explain,I'm dying to know!!!!!
     
  19. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

    Default

    "obese while being too thin", it's clear: the Aerobics Ladies fairly underweight and still thinking they are too fat,lol
    Common feature of annexis nervosis......

    As regards "brushing your teeth with salt" it also refers to a trend I remember from younger years to "expell the bugs" hahaha,Doug

    And who doesn't know about foodprogrammes ruling OK?

    Hope this cleared up your skyline


    O yeah, about the first thing you mentioned: I agree. Happened just that way- without intention!
     
  20. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    Thanks,Amaryn.You explained just fine.I was half asleep when I replied!They still brush their teeth with Baking Soda,now there's toothpaste with Baking Soda which is real salty.