Shot Down

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  1. The Obscured said:

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    Another quick one written about anyone who has been going back and forth with a signifigant other and just can't seem to break the cycle.

    Shot Down

    I lay awake, just begging for a dream, yeah…
    To escape myself and silence these screams

    And in the wake I see
    The damage I have caused
    Opened my eyes but it’s too late…and I’ve been


    Shot down just to turn around
    ‘Cause there was nothing left to say
    Who will catch me now, that I’m falling down
    Into the arms that have turned me away


    Every day the same routine
    Thought I found a way out
    All the words, we didn’t mean
    Wish I could take them back now…yeah

    Cause in the wake I see
    The damage I have caused
    Opened my eyes but it’s too late…and I’ve been


    Shot down just to turn around
    ‘Cause there was nothing left to say
    Who will catch me now, that I’m falling down
    Into the arms that have turned me away


    In the end
    Will I feel it again
    One more time
    For the sake of trying…

    Am I in over my head,
    Over my head again?


    Shot down just to turn around
    ‘Cause there was nothing left to say
    Who will catch me now, that I’m falling down
    Into the arms that have turned me away


    You got me running in circles…
    Running in circles again…
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Obscured One:
    I love the refrain!This is a Classic refrain,and the verses are great.For me to Comment on a Song Lyric that doesn't have a constant rhyme is saying something.Something real good,great job!
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    It's funny, I labor like hell sometimes to get just the right rhyme, but this is a perfect example of how foolish it is to worry so much about that. I didn't even notice til you mentioned it Doug.

    Great lyric!
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  4. The Obscured said:

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    Thanks guys, I appreciate it.
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside
     
  5. KathyB said:

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    I really like the chorus, very tight. I also think your opening line is great. Puts you right in line for the rest of the story.
    Kathy