wow. just. wow. This is right up my alley! Dark, desperate and deep. I love it. I especially love the opening lines,
My voice is a thing so hollow
Too drunk to argue....
Too tired to care....
Im gonna eat your bullet now....
Sift through my remains...
You can find my thoughts there...
Great job on this! I strongly urge you check out my piece "Break Me Open" - http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...-good-bye.html
But back to your song...
If I may ask, what brought on your inspiration of this song and is it recorded anywhere on the web where I can hear this? I'd love to see this put to music. I'd love to know more about your writing style/process. Great stuff!
We're a little bit stranger on the inside