Little update and a couple new songs...

I have a couple new songs to share with you guys. This one is called 'Tears Like The Rain'...

Verse 1
How do you think it feels
When you are never here
How do you think I cope
You could've been an antidote
And I was wondering for so long
Where the **** had you gone
But I came to my senses and I dont care
It may sound harsh but life aint fair

Chorus
You caused hurt and you caused pain
I lost tears like the rain
You caused stress and heartache
Is this the path you wanna take
What can I do what can I say
When all you wanna do is stay away
If you came back it wouldn't be ok
Because words aint enough to replace this pain

Verse 2
I'm finally getting on just fine
I've put all my bad memories behind
Left them in the gutter where you belong
Because you couldn't tell right from wrong
My family is all I need
And I know they're always behind me
So please dont ever come back
I'm ashamed to say your my flesh and blood

Chorus
You caused hurt and pain
I lost tears like the rain
You caused stress and heartache
Is this the path you wanna take
What can I do what can I say
When all you wanna do is stay away
If you came back it wouldn't be ok
Because words aint enough to replace this pain

Kmatt,
I like this a lot,strong rhymes great rhythm,a winning combination.I'll say it again,give others feedback if you want comments on your Song Lyrics.I saw that all your posts were on your own Threads.Help out some other folks that what to hear what you have to offer.Your a good writer,now share that knowledge with some others.

I agree. It's a nice song