Re-volution

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  1. Teshka's Avatar

    Teshka said:

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    This was written as a paradox of time and age and timelessness of the human soul which i believe has no beginning or end, which can lead to a lot of questions, but the only question that can be answered is who and where we are in the present moment, and that is always determined by what and where we used to be, even just moments ago. We are an always changing sum that is never completed.

    I am just a baby
    Though I've been where you are now.
    Looking back I don't ask why
    And it's no mystery how
    I came to be this person
    Who is not the same as then...
    It's all because the future asked
    To be replayed again.
    But every time it runs its course
    I see a different you
    And I'm no longer who I was,
    I'm born to something new.

    I am just a baby
    But I've lived a thousand lives
    And I see nothing new although
    each journey brings surprise.
    Time is twisted round itself
    And future is the past,
    But every re-volution
    Wants itself to be the last.
    So here I am as me now
    And be sure that I won't miss,
    Each time we meet again,
    The simple pleasure of your kiss.
    Last edited by Teshka; 11-15-2012 at 11:24 AM. Reason: Caps & spellings
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    A volution is a spiral or a twist, like on a seashell.
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    You just love to twist my mind coz you know I'm easily bored.

    I'm gonna trade you in for a California model with extra smog control.

    ^-^

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    <33
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    amaryn said:

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    THANKS , TESS, I can hear the "catch me if you can" motto with a "vicious" grin on your face

    this is probably what makes people always have their doubts about themselves- unless they're idiots- and others....

    constantly on the move, I have nothing against it. Boredom seems impossible here, Moon,lol

    MOON: getting bored with TESS by your side???? Don't worry: IMPOSSIBLE!
     
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    lol no amaryn i don't think he gets bored very often with me
    Thank you for the comment!
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    "I'm am just a baby,but I've lived a thousand lives".Brilliant!!!!
     
  8. Teshka's Avatar

    Teshka said:

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    Thank you Doug!!
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Teshka View Post
    lol no amaryn i don't think he gets bored very often with me
    Like, for example, that "wake-up" you left this morning in the mood thread. Lawd he'p meh. But seriously, this poem is so you babe. And I love it.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Teshka said:

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    tysm baby <33
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Eccer said:

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    Very good, I like the simplicity, yet portraying a deep twisting context. Couldn't be better in my opinion
     
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    Teshka said:

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    Thank you Eccer!!
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    amaryn said:

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    "each time we meet again
    the simplest pleasure of your kiss" :



    Tess:now you have a cold - you blame it on Moon!

    as Jack Nicholson would say: "It's as good as it gets"


    GET BETTER SOON,LOVE
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Yup .......

    Tess has also been having severe problems getting onto ATL all day, so she asked me to say "Hi" or "Thank you" wherever it might be appropriate, and maaaaybe she'll be able to get on before she goes to bed. But I told her not to count on it, coz it's taken me almost an hour just to make 2 posts...
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    It is a joy indeed
    to witness this, and read
    of light within the light be felt and seen.
    The life between the lines,
    the 'I am that' who smiles
    are shedding skins of who you might have been.
     
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    Teshka said:

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    Thank you OrchestraInside that adds a great extra touch and with a nice cadence


    dlya tebe dushen'ka

    In might-have-been or not
    what-will-be is what i've got
    and each volution turning new
    always brings me back to you <33
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by MoonRide*r* View Post
    Yup .......

    Tess has also been having severe problems getting onto ATL all day, so she asked me to say "Hi" or "Thank you" wherever it might be appropriate, and maaaaybe she'll be able to get on before she goes to bed. But I told her not to count on it, coz it's taken me almost an hour just to make 2 posts...

    So we can assume, Moon, that Tess has only a cold, but ATL has pneumonia Well, as I told you, here in Europe we also wonder at times.
    There are days ATL announces to me "Server error" or "404 Not Found" and that can take hours. Also YT can just be on a strike.
    When the going is tough the tough get going"

    TIP: make her a strong gingertea from real ginger, boil for ten minutes in water and let her sip it: for me it works at least
     
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    Teshka said:

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    Thank you amaryn and yea i love cinnamon tea, but also hot lemon tea with honey which i'm sipping on now....hoping/wondering if it will help me sleep or keep me awake lol.....i'll let you know how that turns out
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    VivaPalestina said:

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    Now edit it and put the capitals, commas at the end and complete the slang terminology Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Teshka View Post
    the simplest pleasure of your kiss.
    I know this seems pretty weird, but I'm actually having a long internal monologue why simplest pleasure and not the simple pleasure?
     
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    Teshka said:

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    I don't know except that at the time that i wrote it i was thinking that a kiss can be the most simple thing in the world even as it's moving the earth beneath my feet
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~