Should I finish? Feedback and criticism!
With shattered dreams outspoken and a home unknown
Try to mend savage gashes actions I won't atone
Blown blunts for days at a time in each session
*****s crack under question an expressed confession
Antagonized by thoughts in constant succession
Brutalized in discretion my hearts in sections
From lost love my affections becomes infected
Cross my values and see a pentagram connected
Projection. World succumbs to evil without loves presence
So upset that bullets will further become my anti-depressants
Poor peasants, living solely on a quest to just stay alive
Evil thoughts bested heaven the devil and I can coincide