Beyond Ego

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  1. Zakynthos said: 11-07-2012 11:06 AM

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    Amethystos said: 11-07-2012 11:42 AM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zakynthos View Post
    We go fall without fear
    We scream knowing they won't hear
    We will always be right near
    To make, for you, all things clear
    Brilliant!
    So general, so accurate!



    Quote Originally Posted by Zakynthos View Post
    Beyond ego, imagination, super-ego
    There are friends, there is love, there is sex
    All combined, body and soul, healthy mind
    Beyond knowledge, what we call "we", is life's message


    Way too mature stuff for your age!
    "Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to?
    You will never find that life for which you are looking.
    When the gods created man they allotted to him death,
    but life they retained in their own keeping"
     

  3. Zakynthos said: 11-07-2012 12:27 PM

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    305622_3327169357658_783742033_n.jpgThank you Amethyste! Here's an image that I made myself (actually, I edited the wall background and added the text)
     

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    amaryn said: 11-08-2012 04:34 AM

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    Hi Zak! You really have your own style to say things and you put them well in bundled thoughts.
    The Beyond Ego Image looks fascinating. Great idea to deliver a text with it!

    Efgaristoume para poli akoma!
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 11-08-2012 03:55 PM

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    Look who's back
    IT'S ZAK,IT'S ZAK

    welcome back,long time no see(or should I say,"no read")
    I'm glad you came back with a HIT!!Again,I think this could be a song.And a good song at that!The third or fourth stanza being the refrain,and the last verse being rapped or spoken,with the others being sung.This is the highest praise I can give a poem;that it could be a song!Well done,my young brother!
     

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    amaryn said: 11-09-2012 05:40 PM

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    DOUG has such a good way in putting thoughts on the table,lol
    As a musician I fully understand you, Doug! There's momentum for the song version!
     

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    Eccer said: 11-13-2012 08:50 AM

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    Zakynthos, I like your text because it speaks to me in a simple yet very refined way I wrote something similar here the other day, so that's why I thought it funny when we posted almost at the same time ^^

    Good job! Keep up the good work
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 11-14-2012 03:24 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    DOUG has such a good way in putting thoughts on the table,lol
    As a musician I fully understand you, Doug! There's momentum for the song version!
    I respect your opinion!You're a very intelligent gentleman!