A Wolf In The Woods (by Rickey Joe and 2numbers)

I can smell it
A heart is bleeding
I can feel it
A woman is needing
It's everything
It draws me near
I wait and watch
In the absence of fear

Wake up, sit up
Look around
Motherf*cker
It will do no good
I've got the scent
And I'm hell bent
Best take care
'Cause there's a wolf in the woods

I can sense it
A life is shattering
Cannot fix it
It's all so maddening
It's all of me
It brings me close
To the touch
She's cold as a ghost

Wake up, sit up
Look around
Motherf*cker
It will do no good
I've got the scent
And I'm hell bent
Best take care
'Cause there's a wolf in the woods

I'm watching
Alone in the rain
Waiting for that
One sign of pain
Circling, seeking
Waiting for you to drown
You will do it for me
And your kingdom comes down

Wake up, sit up
Look around
Motherf*cker
It will do no good
I've got the scent
And I'm hell bent
Best take care
'Cause there's a wolf in the woods

There's a wolf in the woods
He is licking his chops
A wolf waiting for the goods
That cannot be stopped...

I like the way you started this out. The first verse is strong and goes with the chours then you took a different situation for the 2 and 3 rd verse its ok but I wanted to hear the continuation of the girl from the first verse.

This may be to direct but how I took the wolf and the girl is you were sniffing around someone in heat and very needy and hurt, you were just watching and waiting and at the end of the day she was going to be yours cuz its a chemical physical thing.

No clue if its right or wrong doesn't matter but I wanted to hear what happened in the second verse....

So good writing you pulled me in.

co writing is about 2 minds one idea not 2 minds each put there own idea in the song...just sayin.....

Classic!