Let It Go

Thread: Let It Go

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  1. Malay_razor said:

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    There were times when I had enough.
    to feel happy, was really tough.
    I was falling, thinking no one will catch me.
    but I was wrong, oh yeah.

    you didn't see what I had for you.
    it was painful, but I cant blame you.
    the loneliness crept in my veins.
    it helped me to break those strains

    its time, to let it go,
    to laugh and smile,
    to breathe the the beautiful life
    its not over yet,its not over yet

    I cant forget those times.
    dont ever think that
    its just that I buried them alive
    beneath the ones of them,who helped me up.

    its time, to let it go,
    to be crazy and to love it
    to look ahead and move on.
    it aint over. It has just begun.
    Last edited by Malay_razor; 03-23-2013 at 02:04 AM.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Not bad!Only ask you to take "it"out of the first line.When I had enough,is the line you're looking for.Love the the refrain and the little change you made at the end.
     
  3. Matt6660 said:

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    Agreed with Doug.
     
  4. Malay_razor said:

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    Thanks man. Your suggestion taken. Will remove 'it'
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Malay_razor View Post
    Thanks man. Your suggestion taken. Will remove 'it'
    When?I'm waiting....................
     
  6. Malay_razor said:

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    Did it bro
     
  7. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Malay_razor View Post
    Did it bro
    You see,I care about you and your art.
     
  8. Malay_razor said:

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    Thanks man. Really appreciate it.