dananana nana na na na na

this heart an empty casting
i finnally found something lasting
and when my world was quickly crashing
you found my hand and we went dashing
this missing piece to my puzzle
you fit my heart like no other
i dream of you while im sleeping
and without you im left weeping

dananana nana na na na na
dananana nana na na na na na X2

turn 18 you swear you'll take me
say that you'll never leave me
make a home that's bright and cheery
i know you'll always hear me
each line a hidden message
each na an i, i love you
each breath an ill be with you
each sigh a long-full i miss you

dananana nana na na na na
dananana nana na na na na na X2


black and white is not how i see
even though its night breath easy
just know that ill be with you
waiting just outside your window
and only you really saw me
i was lonely deaf and angry
in the dark swear you'll hold me
just how the hell was i so lonely?

dananana nana na na na na
dananana nana na na na na na X2

dananana nana na na na na
dananana nana .na.. na.. na... na.... na..........

Phil, I like this. It reminds me of novelty songs of the past. The "my" in the second line needs to go, and the last stanza is not as strong as it could be. I know what you're capable of, so think about tightening up the last stanza. Good work, glad your hitting your stride again!