'solo tu'

(verse1)

Sitting at class, on my desk at the center row
Looking at this girl across the room, and am like I don't know
Whether I got a thing for her
If what I feel is really true.

I keep smiling at her all day, and she doesn't do the same
I think of approaching her at the hallway, and it's not a game
But she is more of a celebrity
And being with her is far away from reality.

{chorus}

Lemme just sit here and start with my fantasy
I'll build my own castle and make it a galaxy
You can be in it, if you like it
'Cos it's for us to live to eternity.

Or I can have a dream and play Mr.Capitan
You can join and we sail to the deeper sea
In my cruise you will be my only one
I love you solo tu.

(verse 2)

I keep looking at the clock, but it doesn't move
I think again of her and I get all shaken up
She got cute eyes, it's very true
She do fill my world with happiness.

<bridge>

Why does this have to happen?
When will she know I'm the right guy for her?

(c)2012 WILSON GITAU KINYUA

Hiya Wilson, you have a good storyline to this and I would like to critique it after I've read it a couple more times. Give me a spell to mull it over.

Hehe.thank you.yep,you may read it again and again..thanks again.hope you liked it.

Thanks alot.please,if you don't mind,point some of the minor changes so that i can instantly correct and improve the lyrics.i will gladly accept any corrections coz you will have helped me alot.thanks again.

Man,those aren't minor changes but essential changes.thanks alot.

Tighten up some of the longer lines.I can't imagine how these lines would be sung.Try to lose some words that are unnecessary.

I will try to tighten up a little bit but ,um,i think it can be sung.there is this way where you sing out a line and the next line is like giving more info.about the first line.like the 2nd line is in brackets..e.g i realy feel cold<what do i do now?> or like...the sun is up there<shining bright>.yep.something of the sort.but i appreciate your comment.thanks again.