'My girl'

(VERSE 1)

Making these days
move a little bit slow
hoping and praying you
were somehow close
i bow my head and make a wish
oh oh oh baby you are that wish.

Sitting on the couch just thinking of you
girl you are my all,you make me new
we are the best and still will be
am gona love you with the whole of me.

Girl how you laugh
i do like that
and your smile too
knocks me off the ground.

{CHORUS}

Many things would be done,and would be said
but i don't care
coz you are my princess
i'll catch your tear as
it tries to fall
coz you are amazing and you are my all.

I feel so happy when you call my name
it's like am in lights with all the fame
i'll take you pictures as you dance ballet
and am gona have you even when am old and grey.

(VERSE 2)

You mean alot to me in a million ways
ten out of ten it's your rate always
cutie do you know that you are my world
and am trying to fight to keep you as my girl.

(BRIDGE)

Without you in my life there would be
darkness
just come into it and make it the
brightest.


(c) 2012 WILSON GITAU KINYUA.

This is good, but not as good as Smokey Robinson's version.

Ok..i'l quit.and for the first comment,um,i don't know which version you are talking about coz i just wrote that song and had it copyrighted.

If you've never heard My Girl,recorded by the Temptations,their first No.1 record,written by Smokey Robinson.......Google it!

Just did that.um what's your point realy coz am actualy confused.hehe,are u comparing my lyrics with a hit song?

New title.When a song has it's own Wikipedia page,it's time to re-think the name of your song.I wasn't comparing it,just trying to make an obvious point.

Guys, please help me in giving these lyrics a new title. Any suggestion will be highly appreciated.
Thanks Doug for the help.

Originally Posted by Wilson

Guys, please help me in giving these lyrics a new title. Any suggestion will be highly appreciated.
Thanks Doug for the help.

Wilson,
I'm glad you finally understood my message to you.It wasn't a "put down"or anything of the kind.I simply told you what I've said to others on this site that have titled their songs after HUGE HITS they may not have been aware of.Other songs I've said this to;Imagine,Mother,Help and others.When someone picks a Beatle song title,I HAVE TO say something!
Title Suggestion:You Are That Wish

Dang!. I'm totaly confused guys.Hehe,do i go with 'You are that wish' or 'You are my all' or even either two like ' That wish' or 'My all' ?? HELP PLEASE.

Go with; You Are My All.I overlooked that line the first couple of times I read it.You say; You Are My Wish,a couple of times.It's up to you,but on second look,You Are My All,is more "commercial" ,You Are My Wish,may be more Artsy and more memorable.It's a close call,go with your gut.

Hehe.thanks dude..