Still Here

[Verse 1]
I know its rare now that we actually have time totalk
But even with that in mind, im the one person that'll never walk
Cus frankly, you've had more of an impact than you realise
I end up thanking god everytime i look in your eyes
My feelings got in the way, now im happy with you as a freind
And i'm gonna stay happy long as what we have doesn't end
I'd never try to change you, your life is your own to steer
But just know if problems arise, you'll always have somebody here
Someone to go to if your alone in your darkest hours
See i understand that theres thorns in the most beautiful flowers
Society isn't kind, but don't worry your pretty mind
Still here, but i can see darkness in your shine

[Chorus]
Its been awhile and it seems like your just ignoring me
You've read all my messages and now im starting to see
Got your new friends guess i no longer matter
But every time i see your picture it just gets me madder

[Verse 2]
I knew it had to end, but i thought it'd be slow, but no
You slammed the brakes down and i took that ****in fatal blow
4 Months later im still stressing, borderline depression
Haunted by your presence and how you'd left me guessing
I guess i couldn't see, was blinded by what we could be
Spent my days stuck inside this childish fantasy
Pain hit a new degree, when i was forced to face reality
Still here, cus i can't hate the ones who made me

[Chorus]
Its been awhile and it seems like your just ignoring me
You've read all my messages and now im starting to see
Got your new friends guess i no longer matter
But every time i see your picture it just gets me madder

[Verse 3]
Well last week we spoke for whats goin to be the last time
Told me we'd catch up the next day, what a f****** lie
Made plans with your friends that day, i decided to wait
After two hours i realized its time to clean the slate
My final gift to you was the game that we loved to play
Figured it was a memory maybe you'd look back at one day
Then you'd see the mistake, throwing this friendship away
No longer there, lost all my reasons to stay


Would appreciate some feedback, i know theres improvements that could be made so criticism is welcome.

Edit: Sorry this is a rap and i didnt realise i was on this page, im re-posting to rap lyrics section

[Verse 1]
I know its rare now that we actually have time totalk
But even with that in mind, im the one person that'll never walk
Cus frankly, you've had more of an impact than you realise
I end up thanking god everytime i look in your eyes
My feelings got in the way, now im happy with you as a freind
And i'm gonna stay happy long as what we have doesn't end
I'd never try to change you, your life is your own to steer
But just know if problems arise, you'll always have somebody here
Someone to go to if your alone in your darkest hours
See i understand that theres thorns in the most beautiful flowers
Society isn't kind, but don't worry your pretty mind
Still here, but i can see darkness in your shine

[Verse 2]
Its been awhile and it seems like your just ignoring me
You've read all my messages and now im starting to see
Got your new friends guess i no longer matter
But every time i see your picture it just gets me madder
...
I knew it had to end, but i thought it'd be slow, but no
You slammed the brakes down and i took that ****in fatal blow
4 Months later im still stressing, borderline depression
Haunted by your presence and how you'd left me guessing
I guess i couldn't see, was blinded by what we could be
Spent my days stuck inside this childish fantasy
Pain hit a new degree, when i was forced to face reality
Still here, cus i can't hate the ones who made me

[Verse 3]
Well last week we spoke for whats goin to be the last time
Told me we'd catch up the next day, what a f****** lie
Made plans with your friends that day, i decided to wait
After two hours i realized its time to clean the slate
My final gift to you was the game that we loved to play
Figured it was a memory maybe you'd look back at one day
Then you'd see the mistake, throwing this friendship away
No longer there, lost all my reasons to stay

Any feedback appreciated , its not the best piece but im hoping i can improve it with the feedback i get from you guys

Dawg,this lyrics is awesome!...just one tiny error..you ought to have put 'chorus' in the right place..Anyways,thumbsup!

Thanks man, i'll edit it now