Thy Fire

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    Eccer said:

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    Through the mists
    For the marching band
    To a triumphant
    Start
    Time stops, and the roar
    From the crowd stills
    Once again, never again

    Given a year
    I muster
    All my strength
    For this night
    I see within
    A sanctuary which
    I shall lose myself
    Upon
    Those patterns
    Engraved inside

    I forwarded

    Until dawn
    And the scene
    Flashed in the
    Brisk morning air
    Whilst
    Glittering gunpowder
    Gently fell atop
    My bowlerhat
    Giving it, a
    Bitter sweet smell.

    Fresh

    Was the sound
    Of trumpets guiding us
    Navigating the
    Distant horizon

    Glimpsed the rain

    I closed my eyes
    For a seconds
    Slept, without
    A moment’s remorse

    Here, I saw

    The fire walk
    On waves, counting
    #1, 2 and 3
    I saw
    The touch that
    We so seeth
    Fire, caress me

    Awake…

    I found myself
    In the middle of everything
    "A mud pond?"

    Marching, suddenly

    Raising my rifle against
    The glaring of the storm
    Destroying what was left
    Of my very legs
    All for this
    One chance to
    Set the fire ablaze!

    Time resumed
    And the bubble burst
    Kalinka was sung
    And the crowd roared
    Once again, never again
    Last edited by Eccer; 09-18-2013 at 11:38 AM.
     
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    Eccer, this is a difficult , very lyrical piece of poetry with lots of substance and volume.
    It needs to sink in for a while as I have to answer various questions first to myself and thereafter
    ask you, if totally astray.
    To these questions belong:what stands "the bubble burst" for, why did there was one chance to set the fire ablaze and what does it stand for?
    Eccer, you blew my mind. But this challenge must be faced,lol
     
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    Hi amaryn, "The bubble burst" is basically what every entertainer/performer/athlete etc... forms to shield himself from any surrounding distraction, to put an complete focus on the ask ahead.

    This piece is an spin off, kinda. Of my service time in the army, it describes the war within so to say. And I wanted to put some scenery to it, so I created some old war esque kind of a thing... and I think it worked somehow. Let me show you a video, to give you clue about what I did there and why I mentioned kalinka at the last stanza xD http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QtsAGzuGfQU
    Last edited by Eccer; 09-02-2013 at 01:45 AM.