Sleep [Stay Awake]

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  1. JeffOpium said:

    Default Sleep [Stay Awake]

    Verse 1:
    If I go to sleep now, then I sleep forever
    I won't dream of the sun, just cloudy weather
    My thought's won't be free, ****ing tied up in regret
    So if go to sleep now I'll end up ****ing dead

    Chorus:
    If I dare close my eyes
    The pain will be set free
    Yet if I keep them open
    I just won't be me
    For my hearts sunk in regret
    And I don't want to - admit it
    But if I close my eyes now
    It's just gonna – sink in

    Verse 2:
    Hour upon hour Day upon day
    Staying awake takes it's toll on me
    But I can't close my eyes, No, I can't go To Sleep
    Cause if I do I will cease to be

    Chorus:
    And If I dare close my eyes
    The pain will be set free
    Yet if I keep them open
    I just won't be me
    For my hearts sunk in regret
    And I don't want to - admit it
    But if I close my eyes now
    It's just gonna – sink in

    Bridge:
    As my eyes come to close
    All my pain's sinking in
    Now the world is spinning
    And I can not win
    My eyes come to close
    All my pain's sinking in
    Now the world's turning black
    And I can not ****ing win

    Chorus:
    If I dare close my eyes
    The pain will be set free
    Yet if I keep them open
    I just won't be me
    For my hearts sunk in regret
    And I don't want to - admit it
    But if I close my eyes now
    It's just gonna – sink in
    Last edited by Mixalopoulos; 01-07-2013 at 07:28 AM.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Very interesting JeffOpium, may I make a suggestion?

    My thoughts wont be free, ****ing tied up in regret,
    So if I go to sleep now, not ready to die yet.

    I always go for the rhyme whenever possible.