amaryn poetry and pics 2013

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    amaryn said:

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    she crossed this morning
    a busy city street
    rather absent minded
    unstable on her feet
    to me she looked
    like a desperate queen
    dreaming of a prince
    she had not yet seen
    I offered her a helping hand
    safety first
    she did not understand
    I saw her turn into another street
    a little later
    still unstable on her feet
    a smile on her face
    unable to forget
    the newspaper came
    the lady now is dead
    Last edited by amaryn; 05-23-2013 at 01:19 AM.
     
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    I sought a place where silence would be
    something imminent nearby the sea
    mistaken though i turned away
    I heard waves roar throughout the day
    i tried my luck down a shady lane
    but dogs disturbed the peace again


    i sat on a bench in a park at last
    but every minute a jogger passed
    in church restless tourists whispered loud
    a stream of people, in and out
    I took a book and stayed at home
    I realized then- I was alone


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    amaryn said:

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    she was wicked when she talked
    she was wicked when she walked
    she was trying to bend my thoughts
    into her world
    she was desperate to see
    if she could make a slave of me
    dominate me while I wanted to be free
    she said that she was a friend
    I just had to understand
    that what I thought didnot count
    that's what she meant
    she knew all what I should do
    sure I didnot have a clue?
    "I know just the kind of girl
    that's good for you"


    though she hoped she would succeed
    she didnot, as I did meet
    friends who she rejected from the start
    I moved out, went my own way
    she regretted 'till this day
    I decided to listen closely
    to my heart



    c: amaryn 2013
    Last edited by amaryn; 05-24-2013 at 09:58 AM.
     
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    @fate and Awkward Memory both great little "writes"!!I keep reading as long as you keep posting;deal!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    you're a faithful visitor, Doug, and it's appreciated! Thanks again
     
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    AMARYN, QUESTION: How do you keep your poetry going at such a steady pace? It seems I am prolific when in (or fighting) depression. Otherwise, basically nil.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine View Post
    AMARYN, QUESTION: How do you keep your poetry going at such a steady pace? It seems I am prolific when in (or fighting) depression. Otherwise, basically nil.
    Well, Frankie, I am an observer seeking often moments of rest to go through what happens inside me and around me, including - sometimes-
    problems and happenings which affect the whole world. I am restless if I don't put myfeelings into words basically constantly.
    You are also an observer, but you obviously like to do it in a different way.
    I understand also that you tremendously enjoy life right now and I hope that you won't have to go through depressions at all.
    But though you have become a more Rare Bird here on ATL I appreciate your opinions nonentheless always when you're ready for it
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default reflections

    red, passion flowers in far away fields
    tapestries trampled upon during festivals
    black, the shadow of Hades
    smogcoated houses of industrial towns
    yellow, ripened fruit decorating tables
    an always attentive moon
    even during nights without romance
     
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    I see that speaking in Deutschland inspired you :P
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    red, passion flowers in far away fields
    tapestries trampled upon during festivals
    black, the shadow of Hades
    smogcoated houses of industrial towns
    yellow, ripened fruit decorating tables
    an always attentive moon
    even during nights without romance
    Couldn't have said it better myself,very nice!my childhood colors:black and blue
     
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    blue, resting somewhere high
    in the lap of the azure sky
    the eyes of blonde girls catching too
    your full attention coloured blue
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    blue, resting somewhere high
    in the lap of the azure sky
    the eyes of blonde girls catching too
    your full attention coloured blue
    I like this better than anything lately,except that thing I said should be posted on statues!Very colorful!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Thanks Doug. Much obliged.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    she was sitting in a garden
    near a luscious apple tree
    sunglasses hiding expressions
    though she seemed to look at me

    invitations, body language,
    of all that I was aware
    but the scent of summerlotions
    was what made me really care
     
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    tattoos on her skin and high heels
    shiny handbag, giggling loud
    decibels destroying answers
    she anyway didn't mind about
    make up made for invitations
    from all kinds of silly men
    giving her the first sensation
    of too much sun, a nasty tan
    sometimes shedding tears of sorrow
    for something stupid she had done
    but always ready for tomorrow
    another day, another sun
     
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    A couple of these lines could've fit right into my Thift Shop Lady song.That being said......good effort.Again,with a little imagination,this too could be a song.In the style of Rolling Stones Aftermath(high praise!)
     
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    wishfull thinking
    shall he proceed
    to walk on the water
    with two magic feet?
    or just melt away
    become part of the sky
    at the end of the day
    he may give it a try
     
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    amaryn one of these days soon i'll get caught up on his whole thread. This is really great......

    Chernobyl....history.....ty my friend. Chernyj/chernaya/cherno=black. The black summer of 1986.
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post



    wishfull thinking
    shall he proceed
    to walk on the water
    with two magic feet?
    or just melt away
    become part of the sky
    at the end of the day
    he may give it a try