amaryn poetry and pics 2013

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    This gotta make you ponder the unknown....

    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    I have thought once in a while
    it would be better to be dead
    I would feel better being dead

    I have thought once in a while
    only silence would mean peace
    it would leave my mind at ease

    I saw the picture of a man
    waiting somewhere for his bride
    I saw the picture of a king
    who didnot go out in the night
    just surrounded by his luxury
    he felt only safe inside

    I have thought once in a while
    death will soon knock at my door
    what am I still living for?

    I have never thought that I
    would then enter paradise
    too much suffering hurts my eyes

    I saw the picture of those souls
    still in people's memory
    I saw the picture of their life
    stormy as the wind can be
    and as fragile as the laugh
    of a little child can be

    copyright: amaryn 2013

     
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    "Just a grin, my only friend."
     
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    I totally agree with Dougg...about the plaques, mugs & frames.

    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    This I ABSOLUTELY LOVE!!!Concise,to the point,Classic Amaryn.This,in my opinion,is one of your very best.This should be on plaques and knitted into throw pillows!
     
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    To walk under these blossoms....



    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    walking along this lane
    I seek relief of pain
    'cause here I realize
    that I live now, not twice

    who am I to complain?
    here I'll return again
    to find my peace of mind
    I almost left behind

    I shall inhale this spring
    as time is on a wing
    not dwell on memories
    my heart it is I'll please

    who am I to complain?
    when I walk on this lane
    I know what I want to be:
    a blossoming cherrytree


    c: amaryn 2013


     
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    a new approach

    as winterwinds blow hard
    I search a way to start
    a new approach to live
    and better ways to give
    why do I seem astray?
    I want to find that way
    with patience by my side
    I dwell here day and night


    amaryn 2014
    Last edited by amaryn; 01-07-2014 at 11:49 AM.
     
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    emptiness

    pale foxy ladies wear winterfur
    arrogance walking the streets
    does it to them ever occur
    whereto their emptiness leads?
    nothing is sure in the world of today
    walls slowly crumbling down
    will show the truth:they have nothing to say
    as they stroll through the streets of this town



    amaryn jan 2014
    Last edited by amaryn; 10-16-2015 at 02:34 PM.
     
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    Emptiness.......first off:Welcome Back and Happy New Year!
    When I read the first line my blood started boiling!(I just read an article about a woman wearing a floor length mink whatever- it's- called)
    Great little poem!I'll be back.........
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    Emptiness.......first off:Welcome Back and Happy New Year!
    When I read the first line my blood started boiling!(I just read an article about a woman wearing a floor length mink whatever- it's- called)
    Great little poem!I'll be back.........

    Thanks, Doug! I can really rely on you. I am also happy to see my good old friend Amethystos here and even Curiosity, our mutual friend.
    Yes, it took a while, as my life has gone through substantial changes but now it seems to get more quiet again.
    See you soon.
     
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    Amaryn,

    This is quite beautiful. I just love the fluidity of one line to the next. Your use of imagery is masterful. To be able to make a trait 'arrogance' take on a persona is just amazing. The "foxy" with the "winterfur"- genius!!

    Your rhyming is very subtle. And in that way it is very delightful to read.
    You have a new fan!!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    To walk under these blossoms....
    This poem is stunning!!! Oh my goodness- the word choices, the detailed descriptions...you allow your reader to embark on this journey WITH you- which is just remarkable. In that sense, it is a very welcoming and warm poem.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by jessie zuppo View Post
    Amaryn,

    This is quite beautiful. I just love the fluidity of one line to the next. Your use of imagery is masterful. To be able to make a trait 'arrogance' take on a persona is just amazing. The "foxy" with the "winterfur"- genius!!

    Your rhyming is very subtle. And in that way it is very delightful to read.
    You have a new fan!!
    why am I "reply with quote" on Jessie's Reply........because I wanted to make sure she knows how happy I am that she too is now "a fan"!!Jessie:I always come to the Poetry section to see if Amaryn has written anything new.It's one of my "stops" while traveling around this site!So,I just wanted to let you know........great choice,sister!
     
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    vulgarities


    come, dance with me the Assad dance
    puppet on a string
    a delicate balance
    daddy has taught
    to dance without thought
    giving living in peace not a chance

    come dance with me the rebels dance
    time to revenge
    no time for romance
    dreams about paradise
    throwing a fateful dice
    refusing to give peace a chance


    c: amaryn 2014

     
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    A few miles away
    in the desert of love
    no words are spoken
    just a smile is enough
    a subtle sign of what to expect
    and a gentle warning
    what one shouldnot neglect

    @amaryn feb 2 2014
    Last edited by amaryn; 02-02-2014 at 05:48 AM.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    A few miles away
    in the desert of love
    no words are spoken
    just a smile is enough
    a subtle sign of what to expect
    and a gentle warning
    what one shouldnot neglect

    @amaryn feb 2 2014
    Too subtle........
     
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    oblivion

    under hundreds of plastic dirtbags
    nothing lives
    but the smell of decay
    a challenge
    of triviality

    @amaryn 2014
     
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    the wind

    with caressing fingers
    strokes the wind through her hair
    "console me"
    she whispers
     
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    snow

    snow
    is innocence
    the world doesnot know




    @amaryn 2014

    Last edited by amaryn; 02-05-2014 at 04:20 AM.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    thank you, my friends, for reading and often also commenting on my poems during 2013 and jan.2014.
    I have now opened up a new thread, where my poems for the year 2014 will appear.
    Welcome as always!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    she mumbled words
    she didnot even understand
    a turned off engine
    rusting into oblivion
    Why was this posted here and not on "Amaryn poetry and pics 2014"??????