Mistakes we knew we were making

Verse one:
We can't pretend like this never happened.
Cuz consequences have no end.
We made our choices, ran into the wall of sweet revenge.
And there's no escape from what lies around the bend.

Chorus:
Mistakes we knew we were making,
caused from nothing more then greed.
With troubled sleep and weary eyes,
we no longer believe in what we need.

Mistakes we knew we were making,
wishing only to rewind.
With broken hearts and twisted minds,
searching for truth in a pile of lies.

Verse two:
We can no longer live like this.
Consumed in nothing but selfishness.
We made our choices, even though it felt wrong.
And now we're stuck here, forever long.

Chorus:
Mistakes we knew we were making,
caused from nothing more then greed.
With troubled sleep and weary eyes,
we no longer believe in what we need.

Mistakes we knew we were making,
wishing only to rewind.
With broken hearts and twisted minds,
searching for truth in a pile of lies.

Traingirl, when Miss Insomnia keeps you company as it does me at times, it really makes you feel the world's no good.
A well done song and a great chorus!

Thank you a bunch!

Originally Posted by amaryn

Traingirl, when Miss Insomnia keeps you company as it does me at times, it really makes you feel the world's no good.
A well done song and a great chorus!

You should introduce Miss Insomnia to The Sandman;perfect combination!
Favorite Line:wishing only to rewind.
I think you should call this:Mistakes.
It's right on the money,and easy to remember.That's the name of a Hit!

"searching for truth in a pile of lies" is my fav line.
Traingirl, that's like a modern version of "a needle in a haystake"
You hit the nail on the head

Thanks you guys!!

you don't mind that I try to knit another song or poem based upon selfishness, do you? got an idea!

Nah man do it! Its a very good subject (: so much selfishness in the world!

Great piece you got here.

Really good. Very nice. The title is a little too long. I think it'd be hard to remember it.

Thank you both,
and to the title being too long, some of the best songs have the longest titles. If its good enough, it'll be remembered (:

Originally Posted by Thatsmeonthetrain

Thank you both,
and to the title being too long, some of the best songs have the longest titles. If its good enough, it'll be remembered (:

Take Pink Floyd:"On The Dark Side Of The Moon"
Four Tops:"ReachOut, I'll be There"
Mr.J.Brown: "It's a Man's Man's world!".....
Nightwish:"Phantom of The Opera"

you're right there

favorite lines: "With broken hearts and twisted minds,
searching for truth in a pile of lies. "

hands. down. Great song

Thank you so much!