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  1. Tania15's Avatar

    Tania15 said:

    Default When you're crushed

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  2. Debeaux said:

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    I thought it was really good, I really liked both of your chorus verses. Well done
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Tania,
    I like this song a lot!As far as the title.....it's a famous Rolling Stones song.It's up to you whether you want to compete with them for attention.I'd change the title,but the song itself,rocks!
    Title idea:Reconnection
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    It rocks indeed. It's a rather optimistic one. No way it should be sentimental, that would destroy it. No Dolly Parton stuff, please!!!!

    I'm gonna have breakfast after reading this one. You made me feel good, Tania!! Thanks.


    As regards the title: "Way Out" perhaps?
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    Tania15 said:

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    Thank you all! I will think about the title.
     
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    Tania15 said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by RickeyJoe View Post
    Nice little ditty. Good words. I've only seen one mistake and it was only in grammar, no biggie.
    What is the mistake?
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    I thought about the title. Thank you for your suggestions, but I think I want the title to be a line/word from the song. I thought maybe 'Things I've learnt' ? It seems ok. What do you say?
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Wipe your tears.That's my favorite line.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Good one, Doug! My choice: "Way In the Dark"
     
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    Tania15 said:

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    It's gonna be either Way in the dark or When you're crushed.
    The journey has begun. "Nothing safe is worth the drive."
     
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    Tania15 said:

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    Yeah. Haha! Thanks!
    The journey has begun. "Nothing safe is worth the drive."