Let's hit the dancefloor

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  1. Experimentalist's Avatar

    Experimentalist said:

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    Another new set of lyrics today...written about moody teens who think the world owes them something, I used to be one myself. Get of yer **** and do something ha!


    So you think you're eccentric
    Because your clothes don't quite fit
    But really you're no different
    Drinking till your dead is no achievement

    It's time for a little desire
    And raise yourself a little higher
    Jump through the fire
    Don't be afraid to aspire

    Bridge

    But it's not easy when you are young
    And no-one told you this day would come
    And I know it seems like you're on your own
    But stand up, be counted and let yourself grow


    Chorus

    So what are you waiting for
    Let's hit the dancefloor
    That's what your here for
    And I can't take this anymore
    So, what are you waiting for
    Let's hit life's dancefloor
    That's what your here for
    And I can't take this anymore
    Last edited by Experimentalist; 01-21-2013 at 05:42 AM.
     
  2. Tania15's Avatar

    Tania15 said:

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    I really liked the chorus.
     
  3. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    E,
    This reminds me of a song I wrote called "Just a Teenager". Maybe I'll post it now. It's not quite right, but I doubt I'll ever rewrite it.One more thing,after coming back to read this again;the chorus is so good,I advise you to rearrange the song so you repeat it at least twice.This has to be sung twice.Seriously consider this advice,I feel that strongly about it.
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 01-21-2013 at 06:40 PM.
     
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    WishinOnAStar said:

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    I like the chorus too.
     
  5. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    You caught the aching, sometimes funny problems of people growing up in a tight bundle of words.
    A very rhythmical chorus: Good work you delivered!