'my everything'

(VERSE 1)

I catch myself with
my face all smiley
in a large crowd girl
you are the bestie
we'll kiss and chill
in a roller-coaster
then reminisce like
we're supposed to.

All them other chics
can't compare to you
for sure you are like a
dream come true
if you were in a play
it would totaly sell-out
with your hair,lips and eyes you stand-out.

BRIDGE:

Dudes be like dang! She's already spoken-for
and I'm like hehe,she's my world and more.

{CHORUS}

Seen many things and
different faces
Tokyo,Japan yeah,I've
been to places
but never came across
a girl like her
I'm happy to loudly say
she's the one.

Hollywood,Disneyland
we will go
you are amazing girl
you should know
I would be Shrek if you'll be my Fiona
babe you are my everything.

(VERSE 2)

I love how you put
your hand in mine
it leaves me all day
feeling so fine
I fell for you now you
are all I have
baby it's true you are
my epic love.

You say we can't meet
and for real it ain't ok
later you call me up
saying was a j slash k
she sends me texts
with xoxos
I do the same it's
a ditto.

HOOK:

This love song is
for you
you worth more than
a treasure on moon
han you run in my
veins
I'd be in a coma if you
where away.

(c) 2013 WILSON GITAU KINYUA.

I like this one, Wilson! It's upbeat and funny. I'm not sure about the last lines. What do you mean by: you worth more than a treasure on moon han you run in my veins? I would also avoid words like coma in songs that are so happy sounding (I imagine a calypso beat). And what is a j slash k (J/k), a joke??

Haha.yep.j slash k,it's like just joking.hehe.And oh,thanks.I'll change that coma thing,and umm,with 'treasure on moon' it's like it's worthy than like a treasure in the sea..Hope you got me there.Honestly,thanks again.I appreciate.:-D