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  1. Debeaux said: 02-02-2013 03:12 PM

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    Doug Denslowe said: 02-03-2013 12:46 AM

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    Wow,this is a sweet song.Short and sweet!I likes it.If it had the right singer and was sung in a way that I envision,it could be a big hit.

    WOW!!!Do I feel like an idiot,praising a song that's deleted!I guess the jokes on us,the people who went to the trouble of replying!!!
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  3. Debeaux said: 02-03-2013 09:23 AM

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    Thanks Doug and RickyJoe, I can always count on the two of you to give me the confidence to keep writing
     

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    StripedSweater said: 02-03-2013 09:19 PM

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    I can hear the music when I read it lol
     

  5. Peter Both said: 02-05-2013 12:47 AM

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    A love song like a love song should be: simple, yet deep and heartfelt. I'm thinking two things: Just one man sitting on a stool, singing softly and strumming his guitar. Or a contemporary singer like Pink or Kelly Clarkson who has turned it into a dynamic powerballad.
     

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    amaryn said: 02-06-2013 12:07 PM

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    Debeaux, this screams for a cool, swinging rhythm, remember Tamla Motown? One of their typical rhythmgroups might have been able to help you
    bring your angel permanently back to where you want it most of all: in your arms! Great possibilities. WOW!