FIrst time post, first verse i ever wrote...tell me whatcha think!

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  1. randyfan01 said: 02-02-2013 09:41 PM

    Default FIrst time post, first verse i ever wrote...tell me whatcha think!

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  2. Wilson said: 02-02-2013 10:45 PM

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    Is it a rap kinda thing? ..if not,you ought to have parts like verses,choruses,bridges.etc..All said and done,I like the ryhming-words..awesome for a starter!Big up.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 02-03-2013 10:48 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wilson View Post
    Is it a rap kinda thing? ..if not,you ought to have parts like verses,choruses,bridges.etc..All said and done,I like the ryhming-words..awesome for a starter!Big up.
    What he said