The Man With The Porcelain Face

Thread: The Man With The Porcelain Face

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  1. JeffOpium said:

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    There once was a man with a porcelain face,
    His beauty outshone that of the human race,
    And they adored him ever so much,
    They let his beauty become his crutch,
    Yet eventually, chip after chip, crack after crack,
    His beauty began to draw back,
    Underneath that porcelain feature,
    Did lie a scarred and repulsive creature,
    Of vanity, and all things of the sort,
    With beauty fleeting he did resort,
    To desperate measures to preserve his fame and beauty,
    But to no avail.
    For the world had left and moved on,
    Leaving him sorrow in which to dwell.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Hi Jeff!
    Great idea, well worked out and thought thru', just the last lines don't seem to
    have found a proper home yet.
    IMHO you could give those another look.
    But thanks anyway
     
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    curiosity_kills_the_cat said:

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    Jeff, is this about Hollywood?
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Sounds like Mickey Rourke to me!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Hi Jeff, we all are awaiting some feedback,lol! Be so kind, will you?