Here Come The Lies

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

    Default Here Come The Lies

    In this haunting world we find life
    So lost and out of sight
    That we flip through the pages
    Searching for our wages
    But the words do not speak
    The words are only bleak
    And they hold us down
    They speak with a lack of sound
    And here we are again
    Listening to what they reckon
    Over and over we read their lines
    Here we go again here comes the lies
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Very cool,John.Short and to the point.Love it!
     
  3. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    This should be printed in every tabloid newspaper, frontpage,John! It's that good
     
  4. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    On second glance,if you threw in a chorus and split the poem into verses........Hit Song!
     
  5. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Good idea Doug!!
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  6. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    Good idea Doug!!
    I'm full of them!
     
  7. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    I know you are haha!!
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind