No mas

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  1. quickill said:

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    I came to you, after all
    I watched the rise, lived through the fall
    I came to you, when they didn't know
    I looked for you, nowhere at all
    It's all my fault, for what I didn't say
    It's not my fault, forgave you anyways
    They came to me, but I wouldn't budge
    They asked for me, only because
    But this will change, this will change
    No mas, no mas

    Sun scrapes oh an angry sky
    We escaped, another lie
    You watched me fade, after all
    You didn't seem you cared at all
    They came to me, screaming fans
    They came to me... no mas, no mas

    I'll watch you rise, watch you fall
    Summer days, oh enthrall
    They want you now, they want you now
    Without a loss, upon the cross
    But just you wait... no mas, no mas
     
  2. mexico62 said:

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    Hi quickill, It called my attention the title of your poem, and I must tell you that beyond the literaly work, for me is remarkable to notice that you mixed the phrase no mas, in an excellent way, I think that you made it so good, I had never think about inserting words in spanish in a poem in English, so I think is a good idea and you solve it all right. Saludos.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This is nice work.No mas became a famous remark due to Roberto Duran's fight against Sugar Ray Leonard.It's now part of the American lexicon.
     
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    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Estupendo!
    Last edited by Frankie Jasmine; 04-22-2013 at 06:16 PM.