'your wishes'

(VERSE 1)

Hey you over there
I had a broken heart,which you repaired
then you put a stop to all my falling tears
and for that, I'll cherish
you in all my years.

You came around and
brought me back,on
my feet
love love love is what
I feel
girl you in my life it's
a plus
you are more than my
teenage crush.

HOOK;

You make me happy
and never sad
I know you love me with,the sweet three words.

{CHORUS}

Tell me that everything
would be alright
thro' the storm you'll
be holding me tight
I'll never let go of my
love for you
I'm your best and you're mine too.

I'll make you smile,make you laugh
coz I like that
I got you always with me safe,in my locket
give me not one but a
million kisses
and for sure I'll make come true of all
your wishes.

(VERSE 2)

You are cute,friendly and my world
in good and bad times
you'll always be my girl
picture me and you
walking together on sand
baby as we hold hands.

You are the only thing and the one I want
you got me love struck in my heart
I'll save each moment we share on my mind
and if I was able, I'd just rewind.

BRIDGE:

Give me that first
dance
ohhhhhh,you are all
I have.

(c) 2013 WILSON GITAU KINYUA.

Big Daddy Wilson;I love this!Sometimes the urban slang turns me off,to me it dates the song too much.(plus,I'm Old School)This is straight forward R&B,too cool for school!Granted,I've got a melody and rhythm all figured out(in my head)so that helps a lot.Sometimes readers can't figure out how simple lyrics translate into a song.I've been on the other side of the coin,I've performed many of the songs I've posted,so I KNOW they work.So does this,Bravo,dude!

That means alot to me.Thanks buddie.:-D.

Originally Posted by Wilson

That means alot to me.Thanks buddie.:-D.

You got it!Believe it!

I'm glad I met cool songwriters over here,and Daug,you're one of them.

Originally Posted by Wilson

I'm glad I met cool songwriters over here,and Daug,you're one of them.

That's "Doug"with an "O"!(When I first read this,I thought you were trying to say"Dang".(it's an old word we used back in the day)But,you really meant to say "Doug".So the joke doesn't work!

Haha.dang- damn.yeah.hehe.oops,it was Doug.hehe.thanks bro.

I Generally like it In all honesty i'm curious how it sounds to you in your head. I know when i'm writing it sounds different in my head than the way other people read it.

Hehe.thanks.Umm,it's like a kinda slower tempo on the first verse,then the hook hightens the tempo where the chorus brings up the catchy speedy-tho not too fast tempo.hehe.then the 2nd verse maintains a medium tempo.hehe..

If you keep hehe-ing,we'll mistake you for Michael Jackson!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

If you keep hehe-ing,we'll mistake you for Michael Jackson!

Did mj keep on heheing? Haha

Originally Posted by Wilson

Did mj keep on heheing? Haha

Not lately!!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Not lately!!

Very funny, Doug.