Battle Rap: Freestyle Only

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  1. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Template View Post
    http://genius.com/G-mo-skee-ignant-lyrics

    Wow...this guy literally bit an entire track from a rapper called G-mo skee and tried to used it as his own rebuttal against me. Not just one or two lines guys, this fake motherfukker stole entire verses out of this song. Read the full lyrics first than read Black's post after.
    (The first 8 lines of Black's post is his own original bars, notice how weak they are lol. Starting from "I'll spit a sixteen that'll haunt the fukkin' devils dreams" and onward is alllll stolen.)
    All respect lost

    Your an embarrassment kid...Get ready for a whole lot of roasting from everybody on this forum
    Idgaf. I was emulating y'all's hero Lil Wayne. Roast away. I gives a fukk less.
     
  2. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

    Default Addressing your issues.

    I played copy cat
    And copied rap
    From another copy cat
    And that's what they caught me at
    Well that cat copied me
    Coz I sold some ghost copy free
    Now I can't use 'em coz they say it not be me?
    Should've copyrighted intellectual property, got sloppy, gee
    Now they gonna roast me, well I don't give a fukk
    If you watch more closely, you can get a face fulla nuts
    I've sewn lots a roots and I aint about to pull 'em up
    Coz you think I cheated and aint cool enough
    When you ghost, the artist gets all the credit
    Coz they own rhymes is all pathetic
    I know who I am, and I'll never be apologetic
    I'm serious as a heart attack but there's no need to call a medic
     
  3. KennyNeverDies said:

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    Ayt so punchlines is what you want, no actual substance,
    I spit fire with the gas coming outta you, call me Bunson,
    People like me just don't appear naturally, Tungsten,
    Think you gonna break the bank, but you couldn't get the funds in.
    BnB how you saying you getting lazy, you've never been putting in work?
    Think you a bad man, cos you been putting n words,
    Into your lyrics, that don't make any kinda sense,
    Using your shitty style of copycatting, you'd be rhyming that with cents,
    Looking back in your tracklist, thinking what has 50 said,
    That I can use in a *****ng forum to get me ahead,
    Dissing others saying they idolise Lil Wayne,
    It's like looking at a "Lollipop", calling it a candy cane,
    I gurantee by 35 i'll have made "a milli", you'll still be calling my name,
    You'll be looking in the "mirror" and telling yourself you're the same,
    I don't know many of his others, so I'll quit banging his tracklist,
    You a little b1tch, you put the spa in spastic,
    This is a side hobby I do for a laugh,
    You got a cow for a wife, she got some massive calves,
    Needs em to let you doggy, but you have to pay child support,
    Anyways that's enough for you, I'm done with your sort.

    MonsterWrapper, you ain't sh1t, thinking you on a roll,
    Know your role, snitching others to get some parole,
    I ain't saying I invented this artform but it's evident,
    This an orc against an elf, Grunting versus the eloquent,
    Oranges against apples, a fruit twist, it's like fanta-see,
    Beating me in a lyrical contest, your wettest fantasy,
    Mine involve making multiple wh0res moan,
    Your's involve not having ED by changing your hormones,
    You put an ED after everything you write, cos It's all in the past,
    I put A's everywhere so you all know I passed,
    I put an Inshallah in my bar so you all know I fast,
    I'm f*cking furious too, kill you off like one of the cast,
    RIP MonsterWrapper, you've been clearly outclassed,
    You beat me in something cos in death I was last.
    Last edited by KennyNeverDies; 06-15-2015 at 03:33 PM. Reason: Editing ***s
     
  4. Template's Avatar

    Template said:

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    Let me address a few things before I jump into my next verse

    1)Black keep telling yourself whatever you need to make it feel better. I won't bother addressing the fact you stole bars...pointless to try explaining whats right and wrong to a thief. Besides, Kenny already wrecked your Lil wayne excuse with an entire scheme that you'd never be able to come up with.

    What matters is that I finally realized where you stand lyrically, as I had the pleasure recently to battle both _S and you (I'm the only one here who can claim such, especially recieving a "thanks" from _S in one of my verses). Comparing you two, _S without a doubt brought forth content which was leagues above your verse. No exaggeration necessary, this is the truth. The main point that I would like you to understand from this message, for your own improvement, is that you are incapable of targeting your opponent with any core elements of a rap battle such as rebuttals, word play, schemes, etc. The focus of your raps are 99% filler that could be applied to anybody rather than just your opponent. Sure, I admit you can rhyme an entire stanza, Congratz, but that isn't battle rap.
    That's studio rap, and the last I checked, this forum is titled "Battle Rap" so please, enough with your irrelevant attempts at spitting. I already forgive you for stealing bars, so just make sure you follow my advice and improve so we can see a more worthy Black.

    2) The second topic I got to address is Profound...this dude is getting slept on. He legit got bars lately but nobody notices cuz he doesn't hit the return button between his lines lol.
    "Kill anyone on any instrumental with just a pencil in hand honest to God/ my muscle reflexes my Army presence perplexes unembellished complicated dialect dog,f*ck ya dialogue a pile of dog sh1t" Keep it up man. I think its time I give you a shot, post a diss at me and I'll square up.

    3) Lastly, _S whenever you read this, do me a favor: Post a diss to Monster or T-max, Since "you-know-who" fell off and resorted to stealing bars, we need some real lyricists to come back and spice sh;t up. In all fairness, I think the current Max or Monster individually could battle you on equal footing, you been missing out on their improvement. Either one of you three Cees better jump in quick before I die of boredom from Black's garbage.
    Last edited by Template; 06-16-2015 at 01:38 PM.
     
  5. Template's Avatar

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    Im sort of a mediator between Emcees
    Freindly, Fierce, with plenty enemies to enter thee
    Ring with
    My wing width, spans over the land of a contender Pro-Found
    Im in depth with wins using a slim breath, whisper "Leader" as my pronoun
    If Slim's breadth was used to defuse Ja Rule and Cannabis
    Then my breadth will be used to abuse Pro's attributes, pro-analyst
    Whenever Pro proposes a prose
    I'll pose as friendly,
    but if Pro poses as a foe, Ill impose his door through forced entry
    Take Pro's portion of glory, stare him in the eyes watch him pour his envy
    Blow schemes out of proportion till the 16 turns into an endorsed twenty
    Poor Pro...
    Performs poorly in retirement like old hoes leaving a Porn0

    To be pro, you gotta be signed
    But to beat Pro, just ask him to read his lines

    See guys, he's a follower with a sting softest of the bee-hive
    Realize his G side been resized
    But still remains unknown underground: knee high
    He couldn't spit his true thoughts even if he could read minds
    Like Levi, I'm first to rock a new style.
    Freestyle? Who's style?
    Meanwhile, I bury Pro and leave his body in two piles
    Off the top of the Dome, an islamic mosque
    I fast more than ghandi when he ponders the atomic laws
    That's word to Kenny and his "inshallah"
    If God is willing, you'll find Pro's remains in Guatemala
     
  6. KennyNeverDies said:

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    Templates been avoiding me for 3 main factors,
    Calls out 3 MC's in their prime, but 3s still a factor,
    Cos i'll 3s the master, throw him in the compactor,
    Pack his minced bodyparts in the sack for Santa.
    Deliver him worse than his delivery, he'll end up in Atlanta,
    Acting like the bait, while Stat Quo is the piranah,
    You're swimming in a competition that you shouldn't be in,
    If only you'd realised in the epidydimis you wouldn't have ended up in the semen.
    And BackInBlack don't f*cking give me a reason,
    To give you a charge, attacking the king this is treason,
    You're a waste of the machine the loggers put the trees in,
    Now don't come to me like I'm Chamberlain, i'm Churchill I don't stand for appeasing,
    You ain't even comparable to Hitler, least the man had a vision,
    You just finishing bars, fishing for attention thats missing,
    Pro-Found where you at nowadays, you aint on the level Temp endevours to place you,
    Don't get scared when visions shift, and the predators face you.
     
  7. taylormaximus said:

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    Orcs and elfs both grunt...when they're makin' love
    Orcas grunt when they're captured for fun
    eloquence is derived from eloquent. Which you don't have....not even sum.

    "Exhibit 3"notice the beast
    I'm shamoo,
    and when I get around your girl, I'm free willy too. There's a stab.. (lol)

    You bring Santa into this?
    Dude really.. that hurts my feelins'
    I just got over that he don't exist
    then you go makin silly little references that reminds me why I quit login in

    The machine is battle rap. I'll stick you in myself and call it greenhouse gas
    youre pollution. Your pollution is a cleanse to my spirit so thanks for the bash.
    you sound like back.... "why wasn't I included in the list like max....."
    well I'd offer you a calculator.... but you can't factor tact....
    in the aftermath Kenny failed medical class
    then performed surgery on his lacking rap
    blames asterisk for his lack of intelligence.
    kenny ends with a suicide note and novel unfinished as his thoughts. He diminished

    Didn't finish the s3ntence,
    but don't worry the punchline was in the unfinished.
    ww2 references...leave em in the past
    A scar to the world like a iratated blemish
    while backs tryin to reattach an image
    But we saw what happened after that....

    rhymed sh1t with sh1t
    Only his whole rhyme was the stain in my toilet
    A hole of SH!T
    and it still stays because no one will scrub filth..
    Must be afraid of catchin' somethin he brings with
    people like him are diseases.
    ignorant to the last key is entered in

    But I will not philosophize or wonder why he is the way he is.
    back craves the attention he used to receive back when he didn't copy or seem as average as he really is.
    Death I hope comes painfully.
    Overdosing would do nothing to settle the revenge the spirit of rap seeks

    I rhymed is with is. Vulgarity isn't necessary to creatively write venom
    with back it is.
    oh sh1t. "I did it again"

    I accidently copied the name of Brittneys song.
    Too bad I ghost writed it.. lol
    how dare she take credence for my clever talk
    I bet her whole album was bitten from maxs slong.
    You know cuz max is deep...
    when he's fukkin cavitys.....
    Up with dental hygiene (plot twist lol)

    Ken i respect the attempt. you truly tree'in
    in an accent I spelt tryin'
    here's a bacon
    or beer can if youre from Jamaica
    I'm internationally respectfull compare me to the UN. While I bomb terrorist..,,
    give me a breathin'
    Oxygen is compounded to let the idiots breathe it
    Tungsten was founded to destroy Kenny with
    Do you see ken? Youre faced with a predator that sniffs body temp but doesn't follow.
    Just likes the scent.

    Vision see's why visionary 'cees shouldn't compete
    Two titans battlin would unsettle the balance but hes lucky cuz S gave him a responding
    but it's not cuz I lack talent.
    I don't know maybe?
    But talent still has two t's. Not three

    I'm not barbie but barbed wire in the form of your friend
    a noose. Come let me introduce to you the end

    A good autobiography if youd ever had the time to write it
    but max is regociden' your highness,
    You're good and I like you but you're not so high.
    As temp said and I was pro-found to find out
    you're only at knee high.
    so I'll just stomp all over thee and spread your ashes like lotion on the weeds
     
  8. KennyNeverDies said:

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    I apologise for my Santa reference giving you flashbacks of the past,
    Powerful pictures painted by words in my pad, leave you in a trance,
    Orcs and elves? Here you can have a sword, me and you we can dance,
    TaylorMaximus, med school? it doesn't matter if I don't pass,
    I'll use the "machine" to my advantage, Stick an A in front of your initials,
    Send you a card when you die, Stick you full of PINs, it's official,
    I'm a better schemer, knee high? I'll snap in half your femur,
    Cos true artists battle better under pressure, you can call me edema,
    Max you can't drag me down from these heights, you've never reached,
    I've battled dragons, hydras, demons, true monsters unleashed,
    Why'd I be scared of the wrapper, when I can dine on your insides,
    You put Barbie and Barbed wire, to highlight where your sins-hide,
    But we'll let it go, I won't expose, ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
    You write basic bars, then describe them so I guess it's a must,
    When you spit back, I'll assume you didn't understand the reply,
    It's time to rub the lotion on the skin, leave you strung out to die.

    (Thoughts so far: A lot of very clever wordplay in this forum is getting stupidly slept on (not just from me). People actually read the bars you're replying to, otherwise your reply means sh1t all. In battle rap, you're meant to rebuttal your opponents cleverest bars, not just any old ones.)
     
  9. taylormaximus said:

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    Drag you down from hights I haven't reached..?
    that's cuz I soared while you were left beneath grasping for the dust left from my feet (feat)
    Don't tell me how clever rap goes it's well noted, I feel the soul of rap in my bones
    while you...can barely hold your own prose,

    my femur you wish to snap? You can have it here I'll make it easy with this throw: a god has no use for mortal mass. Youre not a pro
    in fact I smell.....hurt ego. Typical young adult

    kenny says to use his cleverest verses
    or it doesn't mean nothin'
    Yet when he replied he was feelin somethin'
    Not friendship, I felt hostility
    to really think max would fall so easily...
    is beneath his own perspective of hurt kenny

    I used his cleverest verses
    Ironic how the narcissist isn't so different from the copier. Both bloated. Goes to show the list was right. I truly thought kenny belonged on it....
    until this pathetic disrespectfull reply.
    Rap is rap no matter the basic
    and basically I'm staten' the basics are always underrated
    but there lies the core of all great makins'
     
  10. KennyNeverDies said:

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    Pro talks a lot about snapping his opponents legs,
    He's basically sending em to me, cos he's in over his head,
    Let the medic clear up, crippled the one you admire,
    As an advisor, I'll advise you to put down the visor,
    Put his head in the vice, make the gaps less wider,
    Cranium cracking under the pressure,
    Memory loss, he's soon bound to forget ya,
    Now he's gotta be silenced for good measure.
    Taylormaximus you ain't worth the reply that you're chasing,
    Spitting basic rhymes you statin' that you are amazing,
    I got that area in my brain, that Shakespeare went and wrote plays in,
    But you saying I'm hurt, TMax you're barely abrasing,
    The structure that was originally designed by the masons,
    You're going against an enemy you have no credibility facing,
    Pathetic? Disrespectful? You gotta question the case-in,
    The context it was read, merely saying you're getting complacent,
    The basics understated, it's true, but they're made to get complicated,
    Same way a true rapper won't appeal to masses, end up underrated,
    A true god would teach his people, wouldn't be their equal,
    If you truly are a god, I'm waiting for your sequel.
     
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    Template said:

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    Played with two stones, rappers sparked and fire started
    First man to throw lightning I'm in a higher margin
    All this talk of kings and gods...
    I don't believe at all especially the weak and small
    So I brought the Magna Carta for Kenny to read it all

    Sign it or hide it
    He's unsigned but signed it cause other wise he'd be unwise and blinded
    From the sunrise he finds it
    Hard to see that I eclipse his reign like planets aligned in
    The right line, like the lines Kenny isn't writin'
    His drive is wrong, and I'm not talkin about the roads he resides in

    He see a star, worship his talent then studies astronomy
    Worldplay slept on? My play on words would smash Ptolemy
    Embarrass Aristotle full throttle with quality
    Unconsciously crossing thee, line that separates an entire colony
    From a prodigy, I'm known to be a better epic than the Odyssey
    For Kenny its odd to see
    3 'Cees that grade him with free C's
    He sees each of their speech as an A, of course he passed his class
    Tactics flipped back dyslexic, don't read it too fast
    Or it'll turn into a Barber's breath,
    And go 'over ya head' with the hardest depth
    If I take steps on Mars then Mars gets wrecked
    Switch to Ur anus and if that bangs than another galaxy gets created by the architect
    Pay ho's like kenny, so pay close atteny
    Your shin split, so sit and finish my last word
    Add ten to attention you keep askin fur
    Add tension when I pet this dog who has to call me sir

    Avoid you? Nah I just employ you
    My annoyed mood, comes from you tryna get big the easy way, 'roids dude
    I'm busy writing your paychecks, so stay wrecked
    Came to reply but saw mines a late text,
    Cuz Max already F'd you up, holes in a latex
    Bring heat, watch Kenny bounce, a fake check
    Leave Heat, bring metal, the Le'Bronze shot, you need more fame yet
    Clearly clever rhymes from Cleveland's apex

    Sixteens are boring, like broads with popped cherries
    That's why Max multiplied it and got very
    Intricate with his bar fest, passed the bar test and pissed on his Honor's arm rest
    I thank your evidence
    Provided proof for Kenny's death and lack of relevance
    Seeing murders aint new to me, but what's new to me is seeing Kenny act stupidly
    Instead of Revivin', he spat his own Eulogy
    A short verse with half lunacy
    One creative bar, the rest ain't show up: truancy
    A true MC would beautifully spit back suitably
    But its obviuos you aint spit sick, from all your immunity
    Try to recognize fluency
    Spittin' fruitlessly
    Then brutally get stripped of any shine, nude in jewelry

    Whats with the overused "elequence"?
    I ain't buying, stop sellin' it
    Hesitant when he try to lead, President without a remedy
    Guess that's why they shot him in the head, Kenny...D

    Lets get back to basics
    Basically a basic Cee is telling every face he see that they aint complacent G
    Ok I would respect that, if he didn't aimlessly, shoot for the top spot: there's no vacancy
    Funny how gracefully he takes fatally dangerous wounds then says "I'm mainly safe to be"
    Not to be is your true destiny
    If Shakespeare is in his head, then may he rest in peace
    But if not, then clearly he aint got the best of me
    The best of me only raises your endlessly shallow bars from their density
     
  12. Pro-Found said:

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    Jesus Christ Temp, do you kiss your mother with that mouth? Bars.
     
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    MonsterWrapper said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Template View Post
    Played with two stones, rappers sparked and fire started
    First man to throw lightning I'm in a higher margin
    All this talk of kings and gods...
    I don't believe at all especially the weak and small
    So I brought the Magna Carta for Kenny to read it all

    Sign it or hide it
    He's unsigned but signed it cause other wise he'd be unwise and blinded
    From the sunrise he finds it
    Hard to see that I eclipse his reign like planets aligned in
    The right line, like the lines Kenny isn't writin'
    His drive is wrong, and I'm not talkin about the roads he resides in

    He see a star, worship his talent then studies astronomy
    Worldplay slept on? My play on words would smash Ptolemy
    Embarrass Aristotle full throttle with quality
    Unconsciously crossing thee, line that separates an entire colony
    From a prodigy, I'm known to be a better epic than the Odyssey
    For Kenny its odd to see
    3 'Cees that grade him with free C's
    He sees each of their speech as an A, of course he passed his class
    Tactics flipped back dyslexic, don't read it too fast
    Or it'll turn into a Barber's breath,
    And go 'over ya head' with the hardest depth
    If I take steps on Mars then Mars gets wrecked
    Switch to Ur anus and if that bangs than another galaxy gets created by the architect
    Pay ho's like kenny, so pay close atteny
    Your shin split, so sit and finish my last word
    Add ten to attention you keep askin fur
    Add tension when I pet this dog who has to call me sir

    Avoid you? Nah I just employ you
    My annoyed mood, comes from you tryna get big the easy way, 'roids dude
    I'm busy writing your paychecks, so stay wrecked
    Came to reply but saw mines a late text,
    Cuz Max already F'd you up, holes in a latex
    Bring heat, watch Kenny bounce, a fake check
    Leave Heat, bring metal, the Le'Bronze shot, you need more fame yet
    Clearly clever rhymes from Cleveland's apex

    Sixteens are boring, like broads with popped cherries
    That's why Max multiplied it and got very
    Intricate with his bar fest, passed the bar test and pissed on his Honor's arm rest
    I thank your evidence
    Provided proof for Kenny's death and lack of relevance
    Seeing murders aint new to me, but what's new to me is seeing Kenny act stupidly
    Instead of Revivin', he spat his own Eulogy
    A short verse with half lunacy
    One creative bar, the rest ain't show up: truancy
    A true MC would beautifully spit back suitably
    But its obviuos you aint spit sick, from all your immunity
    Try to recognize fluency
    Spittin' fruitlessly
    Then brutally get stripped of any shine, nude in jewelry

    Whats with the overused "elequence"?
    I ain't buying, stop sellin' it
    Hesitant when he try to lead, President without a remedy
    Guess that's why they shot him in the head, Kenny...D

    Lets get back to basics
    Basically a basic Cee is telling every face he see that they aint complacent G
    Ok I would respect that, if he didn't aimlessly, shoot for the top spot: there's no vacancy
    Funny how gracefully he takes fatally dangerous wounds then says "I'm mainly safe to be"
    Not to be is your true destiny
    If Shakespeare is in his head, then may he rest in peace
    But if not, then clearly he aint got the best of me
    The best of me only raises your endlessly shallow bars from their density
    Bruh...
     
  14. KennyNeverDies said:

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    I'm from the UK, you ain't Template, so forgive my mistake,
    I thought battles were fought with fists, a shiv or a blade,
    But Temp pulled out twin Magnum's and f*cking blew me away,
    I can come back from the heat, Gandalf the Grey,
    Like Rihanna, b1tch you should know I'm here to stay,
    Slap the sh1t outta me, add me to the list of ones you will slay,
    I'm just going back to the armory,
    Cos truthfully you've been harmin-me,
    The irony is it's only been armin-me,
    Me and my new Glock at one, perfect harmony.

    There's a fatal mistake you said Max won,
    I one-a see these one-derful bars that caused you to shun,
    The one-ky schemes he was using unable to find,
    Real ones, a rap one-derer, rap game plunderer,
    His bars a fallacy, using fake logic, a conjurer,
    I'll pull the carpet from under ya,
    Fly around the world you won't be Aladdin (allowed in),
    I'll go to the land of Darkness, and drink from the fountain,
    I keep stressing the ones, the ones who can change the world,
    Die in suspicious circumstances, their story untold.

    The overused eloquence is cos no one respects the sentiment,
    That a true technician can spit sh1t, that may seem all irrelevant,
    Then with a single bar, make the world see why this is his element,
    Employ me? Temp i'm the most educated in the room, clearly it's evident.

    Spitting in 16s is fun, but I can stretch to 342,
    3 phonecalls made, they'll be freely hunting for you,
    4 MC's I respect on here, you're top of the list,
    2s constantly shifting, like a plot twist,
    I'll map out how you'll die, see if you can plot this,
    I'll take you to the entrance to the valley of the shadow of death,
    Drive you to Cali, pretend it's Scotland and this is MacBeth,
    Hail to thee, Template! Thane of the States,
    You shall be King hereafter, it's written in fate.
    But slowly you'll become power hungry, leading to insanity,
    Template slay's his best friend, and all of his family,
    Wife kills herself, Temps putting his faith in a prophecy,
    My armies attack, the witches words break the monotony,
    It seems Temp was only Temporary, what it'll say on the tomb,
    A traitor killed by thou who was untimely ripped from the womb.

    On a side note, congrats Temp that was your best verse yet. A lot of nice schemes in that, genuinely enjoyed that one. Definitely come a long way. TMax honestly I rated your old stuff, need to step it up. Also not to sound like Bnb, but do make your sh1t rhyme, doesn't flow as well otherwise.Don't understand you people who don't reply just cos a verse was sick, that's just more of a reason to reply. Pro-Found, you're improving slowly, keep it up.
     
  15. Jr650 said:

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    Let's go

    Hustle like Iím broke
    Your **** is just a joke
    Itís all on me and I bet I never choke
    I killed your flow with a freestyle
    You can rap back but it might be while
    Until I reply, my oh my
    You lames workin bad bishes twerkin
    Stack my racks up cuz Iím puttiní work in
    She popped that ***** til she said it hurtiní
    I donít care, treat her like a ho
    CREAM til the end all a hustler knows
    Just how it goes, ya I suppose
    Watch that bish drop straight to floor
    Flipped that *** over put on fours
    Here I come, woah bish woah
    We ride 84s, we tote 44s
    Talk that ish get your head choppíd off
    Yeah Iím out I beast I boss[/QUOTE]
     
  16. Jr650 said:

    Default Fake ni**a

    He about to get roasted should of thought what you was righting before you posted it, you a fake how can you sleep at night, if I was you I get a knife put it in your trought and swing it left to right, how you think you was going to get away with copying somebody else bars, I might sound a little bit to harsh but the real is you just a mark, a lame a shame if you think you can flow just close your computer and go to sleep and let this one go-
     
  17. taylormaximus said:

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    The reply that I'm chasin' needs to equal that of the placement that I'm placed in
    defence? Fuk that I'm offensive
    and for that the abrasion has turned into laceration
    and butt.. more bruised than he's used to. Facts I'm statin.
    call the medic. Kenny doesn't get why I've lost the motivation
    I'm sick with no medication. bootcamp niqqa has got my body drainin'
    that's no excuse it's just what max is facin'
    Blast your whole face with my subtle pen
    leave a hole more open then when you wait for men to stick theirselves in
    sorry off topic but really....ken....

    Just look at your rhymes!..
    I have more fun tactically waitin'
    Santa would give you charcoal for your understatements...
    Less than respect from a kid under statin the basics
    let's be real your complication makes your raps sound constipated. You try to give a sh1t but really ken....you strainin' to make a list....
    Too bad you never made it......

    A word smith would understand the strategy.
    sun tzu wrote a book about it and said to know thy enemy
    as template did with black
    we now know that kenny needs the pat on his back or he thoughtfully inputs crap.
    I'm getting complacent....lol just look at the forum its gettin vacant
    only temp, pro and wrapper are truly worth login in again.....
    ' but I like them all and already faced em.

    Well not pro for templates takin his hand and given him the glow of a rappers pen
    a nod in your direction pro I like the new sense
    and for that respect is all you'll get from tmaximus.

    Idc about winning or losing truly
    that's not why I do this, I do it really to see my own improvement and that of you users usin' intelligence for their own quota
    But why use it when all it leads to is abuse from you. unworthy student.... persona non grata

    lucid dreams surround your reality, tellin you stuff you claim comes from some inner speach.... yeah youre just imagining what max sees
    ill leave you grasping in the psychiatry for something to ease the sting and ringing of maxs meaning.
    You lack vision you have too much credence in yourself,fiend with only a mission for him and no one else
    Ego is your downfall young squaw, here's another beating whelp
    Don't talk just draw, don't write just scroll. Unworthy foe I stepped on your toes and you call me complacent.....
    what a hero you are.
    Thats why it's barbed wire cuz youre the barbie doll.

    you're not bad I've already given you that but your last three raps were not really worthy of yourself.....
    you have an accent we pronounce words different, should i sound them out send you a rosetta stone...would that help...?

    I promise you I'm always keen on what I mean more than the way they seem..
    well i've proved myself over and over again my friend but you seem to find me lacking?
    ...why cuz I attempted a brawl to show all that you are indeed
    a stand up guy... rather you crawl...
    Taste feet youre less than knee high so enjoy what you see
    my nuts dangling

    I may not have templates elegance
    but I'll be dam if I'm less than second with words ken. You're excuses are gettin' old
    I'm ten times more worthy than an older pro (bnb)
    skill? Yeah you wouldn't know if it smashed your elbow and used your eyelashes for velcro to keep your blind eyes closed....
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    Yes, I'm on a roll... rolling your body bag
    Into an ocean, so we can sea you're still a snobby f@g
    You want to be a grade A Cee'(great A/C), but you're just a fan, boy(fanboy)
    Sucking up to Temp in your verses to be his man toy
    When I phone for a contestant to test me, I get Kenny the Android
    Overrated, ignored, and don't forget irrelevant
    A fellow bent on wrath cuz he feels he's been slept on
    Soft and shallow, like a pillow, in which he's wept on
    Bad storytelling and weak punchlines... That sums up your style
    For a while, I've been 'grunting' inside of your mom, bro
    Cmon yo? RIP Monster? Revered in poetry? Reversed internal punches?
    That means I spit poetry in reverse to punch the revered with internals.

    As Nas said,"You's a d1ck riding f@ggot, you love the attention"
    And you also get b1tchy when you don't get the mention
    I'm hormone'd, that's why I'm more honed
    I'll tip ya tibia and shatter your core bones
    Demolish Lyra, and put you on cull,
    I prevent a Cee'(sea) from flying, break that fukin gull
    Until he's the one on the cast, Paul Walker
    Beat him into shape and form of Paul's walker
    'Orange'-suit prisoners vs 'Apple' OG's, what's the comparison?
    Couldn't even 'Orc'hestrate some clever wordplay, how embarassin'
    Couldn't afFORD focus, more bogus than Harrison
    Our battle is 2:1, I'm beginning the genesis
    Then, I complete Exodus to show him where the exit is
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    Why the hostility, I'm here for the fun,
    Natural ability has me perceived as a c*nt,
    Roll up my bodybag, cos it''ll make you mad,
    When they go ahead and bring me back as a hologram.
    A monomer is only as strong as the links in the chain,
    A follower is one who's mind believes, with no option to abstain,
    I'm a great AC, cos I have to cool off the heat,
    You'll mention how great ACN is, worst salesman on the street,
    Cos all you're orchestrating is an ideology you don't actually believe in,
    You're striving for greatness by skimming a cut, you're just thieving,
    You're tryna work out what's going on with this little pyramid scheme,
    Millenia later, people will see this structure, realise it ain't as simple as it seems.

    Keep talking about oceans like you're stuck with the sharks,
    My bars come in rows, sharp as daggers that'll cut you in half,
    Once the smell of blood has wafted in through my nostrils,
    Nostradamus himself can't predict where the police'll find your fossil,
    I beef other rappers opponents, y'all knew cos,
    I sold the right to Start Wars like George Lucas,
    Now I understand the confusion but why y'all Dissin me (Disney),
    It's like I'm taking in all these Na's like it's my job as the kidney.
    This battle is barely biblical, I haven't reached my pinnacle,
    A 2:1, I'm a first, So you can see why I'm cynical,
    When a MC who's underqualified pretends that he's lyrical.
     
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    I see y'all dissin' BackInBlack -n- laughin'
    But the fact is that Blacks not the only cat that slacks in rappin'
    Compared to those that've moved on you hacks is nappin'
    Where did RobbMack go? He should come back and smash 'em
    And SBU would annihilate you *****holes in a smashin' fashion, that's the truth and you know it is
    They probably really in the booth while you stuck on a forum that's borin' 'cause you blow at this
    I never wanted to join, just read their stuff but now I gotta get in the ring and throw a fist
    I don't see a lotta coin, just a lotta huff and so I gotta let 'em know I'm pi$$ed
    You aint fixina win just because you sound like a dictionary when you throw a diss, you mitch bade slackers forgot the flair
    Got the technical aspect but not the care
    There's no replacin' personality, technicality does not compare
    So no matter how technical you cats get, it's still often bare
    This is my first post, but I've been watchin' from the sidelines
    And a lotta you dopes are on a slippery slope and behind times
    I've just been bidin' mine until I decide to unleash the beast that is my rhymes
    I've been waitin, bein' patient but I guess now it's high time