Battle Rap: Freestyle Only

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  1. Phase's Avatar

    Phase said:

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    _sbu,
    man, you are terrible, so I tear you to pieces
    and tear a gate forcefully, then cruise a fixed like Jesus
    you only leave "foes pounded" when there's "animal control"
    you'd "pound foes/fours" only if they were wearing a blindfold
    No "violence/violins"? Don't have to be Šnŗl/"piano"
    Rap's not your "forte", but you can still "take notes"
     
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    checked the forum, saw Pro posted, read it and thought "dam that was really good." Scrolled down and saw _S rebuttaled him, read it and thought "today was a perfect day".

    @Tania, closing this forum would be a shame. Some of the lines that people like _S and others wrote are ridiculous masterpieces.

    Word to "Backing Pigs" lol
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by 4lpha View Post
    Man I spit fire
    Your raps deflate like a tire
    You say your good ha your a liar
    Cuz in this food chain I'm higher
    I got yo girl in my bed
    Yeah I'm bout to get yo head
    Stop challenging me cuz you will end up dead
    Y'all should just quick cu I own this thread
    Man, you don't spit fire, you can't even make a spark
    Every simple line of rhyme I can easily take apart
    Please stop tryin' and go home, for the sake of art
    You couldn't take a minnow so what makes ya think you could take a shark?
    You'll get devoured like a buffet bein' attacked by fat people
    And I swear you must be mentally handicapped if ya think your rap's equal
    So don't come back with a wack sequal
    Coz you rap feeble
    Like a toddler learning to speak
    I believe in God but here there will be no turning the cheek
    Go away and come back when you learn to compete
    Coz I burn vermin so weak
    And turn 'em over my knee, spank 'em like kids that need discipline
    They talk with their goo goo gah gah raps but nobody be listenin'
    And everybody will keep dissin' 'em
    The marks aren't too high, but you'll keep missin' 'em
     
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    Think I was trying man you must be joking
    How long it take you to write that rap u must have been chokin
    Stop trying man you will end up croaking
    Your nothing but fake
    I'm returning like Jason crawling out of a lake
    N1gga your name is backinblack
    My rhymes are about to attack
    **** that gun like click-clack
    Thinking your great ha your very stupid
    Ain't got no girl in your life boi you need Cupid
    Oh wait never mind your gay
    Showing up at your friends house with a bouquet
    Man I am great
    While your rhymes I desecrate
    Now I am just about finished
    But your career is now diminished
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by 4lpha View Post
    Think I was trying man you must be joking
    How long it take you to write that rap u must have been chokin
    Stop trying man you will end up croaking
    Your nothing but fake
    I'm returning like Jason crawling out of a lake
    N1gga your name is backinblack
    My rhymes are about to attack
    **** that gun like click-clack
    Thinking your great ha your very stupid
    Ain't got no girl in your life boi you need Cupid
    Oh wait never mind your gay
    Showing up at your friends house with a bouquet
    Man I am great
    While your rhymes I desecrate
    Now I am just about finished
    But your career is now diminished
    I KNOW fool that YOU WAS tryin' but ya raps just suck
    N1gga you'd be lyin' if you said your rhymes weren't wack as fukk
    And the only chokin' I do is chokin' on you so ya best just pack it up
    And get the fukk outta here n1gga, cuz I've had enough
    You aint bad or tough and ya vocabulary is severely lackin'
    Your rhymes are kid like, everybody can hear me laughin'
    Coz ya for sure caint spit right and I didn't know that kweers be rappin'
    But here you are, thinkin' that you're hard or maybe ya just wanna be near the action
    So you can derive some decent ego from ya secret hero vicariously
    It's hilarous see, so everybody watch as I bury this creep
    Who's measily defeat will be orchestrated too easily in my sleep to be declaring it's beef
    Coz he's just there and he's weak
    And I oughtta bust him square in his teeth for darin' to speak like he's on the same level as me
    N1gga when I speak and bring heat to the street even the devil will flee
    I graduated from the School of Hard Knocks, I got the rebel degree
    So you can eat some hard cox if ya think you're better than me, coz n1gga you's just a speck of debris
    Last edited by BackInBlack; 07-31-2015 at 03:04 PM. Reason: Because I'm a perfectionist.
     
  6. 4lpha's Avatar

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    Aight yo
    Coz ain't a word n1gga get your facts straight
    Stop rapping dude you nothin but wack mate
    Your a poet your not a rapper
    Making these rhymes while you sittin on the crapper
    What's that crap on your head looks like a Toupee
    I get what you get in 10 weeks in 2 days
    Dude your probably graduated outta Harvard
    With your awful rhymes I am just harder
    I'm done with this **** I'm takin this no more
    Bout to slap this wh*re back to 1974
    I'm lyrically certified
    To go hurt-uh-guy
    Threw the method of rap
    My fire rhymes are what cause the Kinetic Theory Of Heat
    While on the other hand you just got beat
    This battle will never be over
    But I'm feeling the luck like a four leaf clover
    That the people in this f*ckin forum are sober
    Claimin I'm a speck of debris nah im a boulder
    After this battle I be slinging your dead body over my shoulder
    Stop rapping cuz your awful
    I could beat your white *** with a stick people would say it's lawful
    Jackin off to pictures of Bruce Jenner
    While your moms a f*cking heffer
    You must be crazy like Hitler when he killed all those Jews
    If you think you can step in my shoes
    and be the man I am
    Lookie how can this d!ck be a p*ssy!
    He ain't nothin but a wussy
    Last edited by 4lpha; 08-01-2015 at 08:59 AM.
     
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    Yo 4lpha
    You're lyrics are a pollution
    Not biting others is the solution
    Don't think you're at all a rapper that's lyrical
    Coz you're about to get whipped like Miracle
    You bite lines and just change it a bit
    Speck of debris? Nope, just a piece of sh1t
    You only hurt a guy when you're sucking his d1ck
    Then you just bite it hard like the way you spit
    I don't tolerate line thieves bro read between the line
    Even if your rhymes got taxed it won't be considered fined
    You're in the back of the bathroom jacking off to wack dudes
    In 2 days you're still only #2 coz your raps poo
    Call black awful but your content is just disgraceful
    Wipes white cream on his face to make it a facial
    And you ain't living the life, you just listen to music
    Mothafukka I have a brain it ain't hard to use it
    Pose as a gangsta more and it'll get you killed
    Your mom and pops working hard to make a shield
    To hide you from that life but you're like "it chose me"
    N1gga, no it didn't you just copying those G's
    I'll end his mythic tail like Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows
    With hollow points, his four leaf clover is a half-scratched lotto
     
  8. m_e_nash said:

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    What is all this beefin' about/I'm doing research on battle rappin' and you dudes stood out/I'm thinkin' "this is just what I've been waiting for, like-minds to challenge me so I can hone my dope metaphors/Been writing since grade school/Around the same time James turned cool/Since the days of Scott Larock/Before yo mama was on crack rock/I'm kinda like one of your female siblings/Wondering why you on here talkin' 'bout tits and cum drippings/Remindin' me of marginally passable diss tracks of late/You know who I'm talkin' 'bout/Those cats Meek Mill and Drake?
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by 4lpha View Post
    Aight yo
    Coz ain't a word n1gga get your facts straight
    Stop rapping dude you nothin but wack mate
    Your a poet your not a rapper
    Making these rhymes while you sittin on the crapper
    What's that crap on your head looks like a Toupee
    I get what you get in 10 weeks in 2 days
    Dude your probably graduated outta Harvard
    With your awful rhymes I am just harder
    I'm done with this **** I'm takin this no more
    Bout to slap this wh*re back to 1974
    I'm lyrically certified
    To go hurt-uh-guy
    Threw the method of rap
    My fire rhymes are what cause the Kinetic Theory Of Heat
    While on the other hand you just got beat
    This battle will never be over
    But I'm feeling the luck like a four leaf clover
    That the people in this f*ckin forum are sober
    Claimin I'm a speck of debris nah im a boulder
    After this battle I be slinging your dead body over my shoulder
    Stop rapping cuz your awful
    I could beat your white *** with a stick people would say it's lawful
    Jackin off to pictures of Bruce Jenner
    While your moms a f*cking heffer
    You must be crazy like Hitler when he killed all those Jews
    If you think you can step in my shoes
    and be the man I am
    Lookie how can this d!ck be a p*ssy!
    He ain't nothin but a wussy
    I got my facts straight
    Why don't YOU get ya raps straight?
    A few decent lines but overall they lack weight
    But I'm sure in your mind they are just that great
    And they would be, half way, if you were a third grader
    So be quiet young alpha and I'll teach you a new word later
    For now be a good student and go and work on your term paper
    What will it take for you to learn hater?
    For fux sake ya tried to rhyme Jenner with Heffer
    Come back when ya get clever, you gotta enter with better
    If not we'll get the tar ready, put you in the center with feathers
    And send ya into the never
    You use some of the lamest words in ya raps
    See I listen to rap and so I'm not really into that
    Either way I don't give a fuk coz this is just the internet
    And I know fo sho that in the booth I'd fuk you up like an Endocet
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by David Michael Collier View Post
    my rapping is artistic
    urs is autistic

    ur a fat ****
    who dosent no how to make a blunt

    u look like a monk who i trapped in my trunk
    i be smoking 40 G's all in blunt i broke you so let your mama hold you, support you. you wont heal cause i scared you, that monk you taped in your trunk fooled you u just thought he wouldn't sneak out think again cause he out smarted you ****
     
  11. m_e_nash said:

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    I guess I was wrong about the challenge part
    These comebacks stink like cabbage farts

    Use the head on your shoulders not the one packed into your saggin jeans
    Read a freakin book or something, nah mean?

    We rule the world and you know it
    When it comes to verbal confrontations we always win, just admit it

    "You don't know me" like Black Rob
    I win this round hands down
    Don't quit your day job

     
  12. GangstaChildolu said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by m_e_nash View Post
    I guess I was wrong about the challenge part
    These comebacks stink like cabbage farts

    Use the head on your shoulders not the one packed into your saggin jeans
    Read a freakin book or something, nah mean?

    We rule the world and you know it
    When it comes to verbal confrontations we always win, just admit it

    "You don't know me" like Black Rob
    I win this round hands down
    Don't quit your day job

    Oh my gosh you can't be seriously telling me that you thought you were rapping
    You're bare talking sh1t like your mouth is constantly crapping
    You got no girls so you're always fapping
    But your belief that you'll pull is nothing but sappy

    You know the saggy jeans you wanted to wear
    It ain't fair
    As a pair
    You put them on but always leave a tear

    I can't explain
    But you'll never obtain
    This understanding until you hear my name
    And then you realise that I ain't tame
    But I'll kill you straight of the track, spit fire and light you with a flame
     
  13. _SBU said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by m_e_nash View Post
    What is all this beefin' about/I'm doing research on battle rappin' and you dudes stood out/I'm thinkin' "this is just what I've been waiting for, like-minds to challenge me so I can hone my dope metaphors/Been writing since grade school/Around the same time James turned cool/Since the days of Scott Larock/Before yo mama was on crack rock/I'm kinda like one of your female siblings/Wondering why you on here talkin' 'bout tits and cum drippings/Remindin' me of marginally passable diss tracks of late/You know who I'm talkin' 'bout/Those cats Meek Mill and Drake?



    Forget about "Meek Mill and Drake"..
    Your lines like they from Keats' quill or Blake's.

    No I honestly hoped you'd go deeper..
    Tried to end 4lpha but I thought 'oh..meagre'.
    You've been "writing since" when? I was never afraid;
    rocked the first mic Edison made, wrote since the first dirt was pressured to slate.
    "Scott LaRock"? Take his name change and reverse it;
    "Dope metaphors" so go swap the rock for sterling.
    "Female siblings" ghostwrite your written tracks;
    Please, I mean, you need help to assist-a rap.
    I skipped the crap, it's fitting that you said the texts are "passable".
    I flip texts I ain't even read, it's remarkable.
    M E Nash..
    Bet he loses every clash..
    If you're ready catch the rhythm, and if M E Nash makes any rash decisions it's his epitaph's addition.
    Tried to diss "diss tracks".. it's a very bad position..
    Try to diss diss tracks and hope that it distrac's.
    Just cut the bull'; I'm the Mithras of syntax.
     
  14. Tyler6270 said:

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    I'm back for battle raps to end a fight started
    Comin in strong, you only half-hearted
    Heartless, not even dearly departed
    You write whack raps go back to startin

    Done with amateurs here for pros
    let go of your vow your words done broke
    abolished into air, exorcised the spirit
    Layin good tracks but your ears wont hear it

    Fear it, because my instinct is killer
    it's iller, bad like Jackson lookin in the mirror
    Lines on the song what you havin for dinner?
    Wanted an apology but I'm born a sinner

    Winner, take a step back n wait
    cant get up if there's no steps to take
    Hesitate not when you begin to break
    You're done with verbage, vermin on stakes.
    Last edited by Tyler6270; 08-17-2015 at 03:50 PM.
     
  15. CrazyKydz's Avatar

    CrazyKydz said:

    Post Template.... I haven't been on in a while but challenge accepted

    I read some pretty good barz from you guys and thought... "Y'all are pretty dope"
    But yea, I'm back,
    I returned smarter than a fifth grader,
    Punk you in big danger,
    Lightsaber,
    Darkvader,
    No lifesaver,
    Hand around your throat,
    Body hanging over a cliffhanger,
    Y'all know I'm never nice, I'm built to kill.

    I'm with the sh|t,
    I started off sweet with you but who gives a sh|t,
    I'll pop your b|tch *** for nothing,
    I'm a hypocrite,
    Walking thru your crib....
    Automatic Shotgun with the extended clip,
    T won't know I'm coming until the bullet hit.

    Me and you we are much alike,
    Only difference is if you cross the line imma split your sh|t,
    You ready for this?
    Cause when I start a war I plan to end it,
    Me vs you... The only way to end this,
    Not me vs your gvng (kik reference),
    F\/ck it,
    I'll bury you and those n|ggaz,
    Got your fam crying,
    Mourning stage,
    Meet your moms at the club.....
    Wait till she gets a lil tipsy......
    Slip a lil sumn in her drink......
    Wait for her to sip it....
    She passes out,
    I bring her home and start wilding in it,
    Leave a note on the fridge that says....
    "Cosby did it".

    Y'all think he tough?
    Well I'm not buying it,
    I'm the best no denying it,
    This shotgun will 'get on up' and knock the soul out him,
    Gun so big it'll clean the streets....
    Swifter mop,
    Tec pointed at your top lip,
    That's when all taking stops,
    All mouth shots just cause you talk a lot,
    Bullets all in your cranium like they finding a hiding spot,
    Drag your body thru the parking lot,
    Witnesses? No worries,
    I got more clippers than a barber shop,
    Slap to the face.....
    Guaranteed he's dropping,
    Palm at the side of his face like he eaves dropping.

    Get your **** in order,
    You can get stomped from 200 feets....
    Restraining order.
    F\/ck template,
    I'll off that bastard,
    Battling rapping + you= a mismate,
    Art of killing I mastered,
    He a n|gga that takes risk,
    Killing him won't be easy,
    But you called me out that's where your shine began and ceased kid,
    He likes the rush?
    But this ain't skydiving,
    No one has ever survived this,
    As soon as he takes off a pair-a-shoot (parachute)....
    Assisted suicide.

    What kinda death do you want?
    Lets set scene,
    Tecs squeeze,
    It's not cyber bullying when I let them tecs-in (texting),
    You the best?
    -scrolls thru forum-
    Where T?
    You were anticipating my response...
    Now what!?!?
    Gonna devour me from inside out?
    Flip my **** to make me freak out?
    Not possible!
    Imma make sure you die logically,
    Fast and proper,
    Bring out the chopper,
    Ride up on T,
    He's shocked when he sees me,
    He's like "let peace be",
    Please B,
    No escaping this so in pieces I leave T,
    You got burned fast,
    As long as it's on me.... I'm reaching and stretching sh|t like Kenny's bars,
    I came back with body bags for everyone,
    But don't jump in that b|tch yet...
    It has only just began,
    Y'all wanna see a Template vs _SBU pt 2?
    Neither do I,
    Cause now that I'm done with T....
    I'm killing_SBU too.
    ____________________________________
    Pardon any grammatical errors I posted this off my phone.
     
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    Well you wont come back when im through with you
    Guess what I am even Fíing new
    You smarter than a 5th grader and think you are darthvader?
    Bet you cant cut paper even with a light saber.

    Now I graduated singing the abcís
    Now im playing with them double Dís
    Got *****es dropping to their knees
    And all they do is please when they
    Spredin and saying ohhh ďthunkĒ
    Because when I whip it out
    They all pass out

    Back to you CrazyKydz
    The only crib you be walkin through
    Is one with jizz
    Thatís right all over da walls
    From me and your mizz
    She could barely handle the burst from my balls
    *****es donít know when you are coming
    But the whole fíin block knows
    As soon as they see me they come a running,

    You think me and you are much alike
    But thatís like saying your white and im Mike
    But you got 1 thing right
    This is me vs. you
    But itís hardly a fight
    You betta go run while your *** is still tight
     
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    Got ya girl bent over nice and easy like I had your mom she was nice and sleazy/ She wasn't tight, but I had her all night so it was alright/ her a** was fat so I gave her the bat on the mat, in the back of the trap then she hopped on my lap for another fap then I hit it from the back clack clack, goes the sound of my sack on ya moms cl*t, but I got to admit she how to work a d*ck she roared, "oh lord!", cause I dive in that p*ssy as if off a diving board/ Now The Lord is in this sh*t, faith restored.
     
  18. Kelsey said:

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    You don't know me. You don't have to **** with me. I'm a mother******* girl, do you wanna get together maybe we, could be someone together. Just remembered I don't date *****, I'm as light as a feather. Your I'm taken by your dad, he's a gem. He invited me in. Don't worry I'll get the money off him tomorrow, who knew prostitues are actually men?


    {DISCLAIMER: I know it's bad. It's my first time writing a rap. Btw it's not a lie, I am a girl and yeah }
     
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    (The Lord)

    SOOO! Do you got anything better on your mind then b*tches? Cuase your so desperate that you fap to girls you know you could never get so you act like snitches cuase you can't get over the fact that you can't produce nothin' more that sweat. Your all prob nerds I bet, in your own heads "Star Wars" flying f*ckin Jets! Sittin' in your room playing WOW with a box of Chex. Come on I'll beat you t'ill you bleed then break your necks. I got more muscles than in my arm that i can flex. Ow you wanna go to? HAHA you're next. I'd rather voice this to see you're face than text. You can't bring "Faith" i'll knock you and hang your corpse in my room like a wraith. I rap for a livin' you know, you don't belong here where else are you gonna go? Cause making your self look like a noob with rap is just simply puttin' on a show. Looking like a dumb*ss is just low. What else you gotta say i can do this all day. Let's go it's time to Play!
     
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    (Kelsey)

    Just practice girl, once you do that you'll turn noobs through a swirl. It dont matter if you're a girl. Drown them in the Nile, don't worry getting in the swing will take less than a while. be the judge and put them through a trial. Lock them up and forget the code on the dial.anybody can choke rather you're rich or broke. Put thier *ss on a tree "Oak".