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    dude go and do your maths
    and look back on how that adds up,
    it sounds a little wack, you couldn't draw it with a protractor.
    infact cuz, your gangster rap, it just lacks thrust
    You sound like T-jay givin a bj in handcuffs.
    lol
    You only 12, so im sorry for even replying
    I didn't mean to be mean but maybe your teething will silence
    breathe dude youll find, but homie sweaters aren't dope,
    if you gonna choke a bloke theres nothing better than rope.

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    Yeah I will admit my rap was outta line and whack but yours was jumpin all over the place like you on crack ooh you just got played there's your payback nīggã cut me some slack I'm only 12 I can be santas little elf my raps are so hot, yours are not I bet you those raps you had were bought you didn't show me what you got and now your caught. I never said that sweaters were dope, nope I said I can strangle the bastard with it. Don't forget cause next time when you talk śhīt don't put lies in it. When you spread lies in the rap you make it sound like crap. I bet you you ain't even spitten instead of buying that rap it was written. You took to long cause all you did was choke so you went and wrote what you could on a note. I did this without even wastin my breath your raps are so high sprung I can tell you smoked meth. What's that I smell? It's death. I just killed you in this battle aww does the baby want is rattle. Is he gonna cry to his mom and go tattle. Your drowin in envy cmon paddle, paddle. I don't know what to say other than your gay and like dīck it's not the other way. I can do this all day And all night come near bītįh I dare you cause I do bite. I grip tight. Bro let's go and get in a fight. Hahah just kiddin cause if you fûįked with me you really don't have in interest in livin I knock you out so hard your memory would be vivid.

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    First mistake> 'So you think your all that who do you think you dr. Seuss cat in the hat'
    Second mistake> All of the rest of your pathetic, child like lyrics... oh... wait... you are a child. Never mind. That explains it. I know it's rap, but please attempt to use punctuation. But alas, even with punctuation and not leaving words out of bars like you did, you will still have gotten nowhere in this battle against me. Nor will you have you gotten anywhere against anyone. As for the rest of you that have feebly attempted to slay me, I will get back at y'all in a few days. Right now I am too busy to sit down and get dirty wit ya. I will say this though, the only one who has me even slightly trembling is RobbMack. The rest of y'all seem like a bunch of grade school kids.

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    Wow bro that was the worst rap ever you didn't even rhyme readin that just wasted my time maybe when you make a dis you should make it good **** I forgot you can't but you wish you could. You should Trynna act like your all cool man you just the help or a tool can't even talk to a girl all you do is drown in a pool of your own drool. Use punctuation in rap haha man your sayin the same thing as the other your gonna make it sound like crap oh snap yours was so bad I can beat you while takin a nap. Yeah ik a kid so what your way older rappin against me so what? I'm still kicken ya butt. Until you can freestyle keep your mouth ****. I mean I just fcked ya girl until I busted a nut. My dīcks so Long it touched her gut. While playin put put on the field so strong I'm like a shield. I never leave empty handed I'm always dual wield. If I ****ed you up you woulda never healed. Everyone that battles me says the same exact thing. Your the king and "I'm beginnin to feel like a rap god" Imma end the battle right here gettin pretty tired pass me another beer while I laugh cause in everyone's bigger fear

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    Mr slick licks a **** daily big gay scene follower semen swallower watch the phantom of the opera toppin ya not comin back rough and rugged rap **** a track up since back wen a watched thundercats could jus chat 4 a while or a could freestyle ya got intelligence of a child but me am wild wit the style dope dealer speed dial forget it like senile dementia never meant to be the centre of this earth

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    You had a good rap at first then you fcked it over like I said before it's all about luck and skill grab a four leaf clover all you doin is sayin all this whack sht make it sound good get people attention this is the second time all this sht had to tbe mentioned so far I thought i'd have competition bruh this is a freestyle rap not your daily superstition so stick to the script and just keep goin if you can't think of anything to say just keep flowin this isn't that hard. Try again and again until you get better cmon now tell me show fresher your raps are a joke it's like all of you are on coke. I bet all you did choke. If we didn't do this rap online i'd take your soul and say it's mine. But right now I'm not in the mood and I don't mean to sound rude with a tude but seriously dude your raps suck dīck and your actin like a prick. You ain't even got a reason for this treason you just sayin it to say it. You should revise your rap so it doesn't sound like crap. I'm raps are so dangerous when they get near you gotta wrap in bubble wrap. Your grammar and spellin and raps are the worst they are makin me think that your cursed and your cry baby who needs to be nursed first, off my raps are as strong as David hastlehaugh they are so sick that they make you cough like I said earlier in my raps Imma rise and be the best possible even beat the rest.

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    Default what r dis dude thinkin

    Yh ur fiancee sound alvicop/short cut/abbreviate Ap/i just graded for my nice cut/far back mehn n am @ d top/ I make corn pop/n in my bag got more boxs/i see ur girl *** wiggle like a ducks/ shiffle differ rice frm an husk/d last time he try battle he got a chicken pox/dat was d reason he dnt post and he was lost/
    myopic i see u cant understand my line/dumb ***/i will av 2 mock ***/till dae chop grass/so fast/like a spell cast/but aint dat/dis hippop not jazz/from ur class u took last/8 years in d same class no pass/u fail/i got ur monk in a jail/bcoz ur face look pale/dis boy wanna chop d house/dat d house is for sale/ur follow like twitter n a tail/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Slick View Post
    Wow bro that was the worst rap ever you didn't even rhyme readin that just wasted my time maybe when you make a dis you should make it good **** I forgot you can't but you wish you could. You should Trynna act like your all cool man you just the help or a tool can't even talk to a girl all you do is drown in a pool of your own drool. Use punctuation in rap haha man your sayin the same thing as the other your gonna make it sound like crap oh snap yours was so bad I can beat you while takin a nap. Yeah ik a kid so what your way older rappin against me so what? I'm still kicken ya butt. Until you can freestyle keep your mouth ****. I mean I just fcked ya girl until I busted a nut. My dīcks so Long it touched her gut. While playin put put on the field so strong I'm like a shield. I never leave empty handed I'm always dual wield. If I ****ed you up you woulda never healed. Everyone that battles me says the same exact thing. Your the king and "I'm beginnin to feel like a rap god" Imma end the battle right here gettin pretty tired pass me another beer while I laugh cause in everyone's bigger fear
    You are an illiterate idiot if you think even your best rap that you've ever written tops my worst rap you little peon.

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    Not bad for an elf kid.
    Just put that ****ing sweater away before you hurt someone.

    Real talk?

    Mr slick get ya training wheels off,
    I feel morphed with
    surreal force, just to rip like im equipped with steel claws.

    Peeled off, all of that **** that you just posted then drifted into your notions with an itch to unknit your focus, broseph.

    An if i get over it...
    Well,
    Im sober as hell

    You dropped the clover when the docter bent you over as well.

    At show and tell,
    You can tell your homies this story,
    And show em how your toering melted when
    my flow flicked your forehead.

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    Allright lemme jump in

    See this my first post I just stumbled on the forum/
    still I spit like Jordan scorin start a war and stab you till the gashes cant be masked with Neosporin/
    spit a verse then gone cause soon I'm touring/you just boring/ keep spittin that bullshit that keep me snoring/
    i just feasted tho I need the rest so keep on flowin/
    you aint dope you a goon **** with me and catch five in the jaw/ a joke, a cartoon, like Vector lines that you draw/
    you'll end up like the ending of Saw/ripped, gutted, and raw/these knuckles'll leave you bucklin and slumped to the floor//

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    Haha u talkin about michael jordan/ a put ma knuckleduster on swing and bust ya jaw and/ murk ya in a moment/ theres a reason every wannabe thats on this forum/ adores him/ cod wen a shoot am scoring/ ya boring/ no chance of ignoring big mataz spit badder skilled amazing rap killa/ as if am worried bout this joker agent black black liver/ a real lame and wack spitter/ ageing crap litter/ tray slash bitter gay agein crack hitter/ ya face get smacked quicker/ take the hint ya daft prick a/ put it down like a vet does with a sick pet/ crossin me is somethin yal regret am a vet/
    you can meet ya death in a sec wen a let/ slugs delve into ya chest left a mess if ya test/

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    dope

    Bigmataz kid I load a clip and laugh while I split ya wig in half/
    I'm the sickest cat Ill have you creepin round ya block like you ditchin class/
    lookin over both shoulders trust me man you not Hova/
    a joke and a spoof/ read my lines I'm certainly proof/
    and shoot slugs through ya dawg like its Turner and Hooch/
    I'm burnin the booth/ wont stop till I'm swervin the coupe/
    I let the gat beat it into you till you learn I'm the truth/
    really kid? I let the semi spit to leave you celibate/
    I'm the king, I climbed Everest and labeled it a settlement/
    you aint a threat/you wanna battle me? say your best then place a bet/
    I stay spittin but it aint Tourettes I aim for heads/
    maim him /then roll with his cake and bread like a pastry chef/

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    This is for the avalanche of sub par, wack wanna be Emcees that been postin' wack raps
    You fools wouldn't know what a real bar was if they got stuffed up ya *** cracks... HA!
    All of ya together wouldn't make one artist
    It's really no contest to see who comes hardest

    Yo... here we go...

    So far all I've seen is
    There's only 2 true Emcees between us
    It's ROBBMACK and me it's
    Too sad, you f4gs sag like flaccid penis
    It's not a passive grievance, I'm here to show y'all
    Who the king is, so line up for role call
    To this genius y'all gona fall
    Coz BackInBlack is into passion rap and that's the protocol
    The raw is the law, you don't get to vote at all, it's already over with
    You couldn't write better than me if you were copyin' over my shoulder b1tch
    And by you, I mean y'all, y'all will never thaw this colder sh1t
    But you fools is stuck, and the fact that ya fukt ya wont admit
    Please don't attempt any comeback wit' ya dumb rap
    Post this note to ya throat wit' a thumb tack
    Maybe next time in ya next rhyme show some tact
    Either that or don't come back

    I define what ill is, like an illness
    Make sure ya feel this, feel what real is
    I'm a realist, I wield this mic, fight and kill this
    Die hard like Bruce Willis
    So where's the booth killas? These chimps is simps like Geico cave men
    Y'all jerk offs be xerox copies, tryin' to top me but ya caint win
    There's only a few spots at the top and you aint in
    I've been here where you aint been
    So shut ya 4ss mouths, ya 4ssed out
    Throwin' rocks, knowin' not that ya dwell in a glass house
    I'll quell ya last doubts
    Make sure they're cast out
    So now that you know I'm on a mission
    And you know this is a competition
    Yo, I wanna know, where's the opposition?
    It's like they write with their minds in the off position
    How can you expect me not to diss 'em?
    When every one of 'em lacks real raps in their compositions
    Got me wonderin' where their common sense is
    Instead it's common senseless
    Creating a lost of interest
    Is that what their intent is?
    Besides Mack, y'all's rhymes wack and I'm growin' bored respondin'
    Every line I scan in my mind I can't fathom why they don't trash 'em and become pure despondent
    None of 'em sound good even when I smoke more the chronic
    Go ahead and write back as I crap a load of manure upon it
    And if they bought it, it's chaotic and they can stay on it, stuck like the little b1tches they be
    Not a one can come and slay me, they tried, they failed and I know they see
    Like a played out topic, they caint drop it coz they all hate me
    But there's nothin' they can fukin' do to me lately
    I'm great see, but they all under rate me
    Coz I'm gonna be what them fukers caint be
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    passive grievance line is sick

    Yea you got a couple of posts I guess you relevant/
    but you aint got the common sense to live in the present tense/
    that verse is garbage this is a marksman against a staggered target/
    your avatars retarded a nice looking pen and parchment/
    but you must be on a starship if you thinkin your bars sick/
    that whole verse had one good line, about the flaccid penis/
    but still you couldnt match my thesis/you lack in acumen its basic grammar, genius/
    I'm heartless like i put a breathing fetus under bleachers/
    chug a fifth and feel a fat cheerleader's under regions/
    my heart has darker features/ you got fag characteristics/
    I'm back, baggin up *****es/ youre BackInBlack in a ditch, kid/
    I write a quick verse then dip, coppin yay like I'm used to it/
    you let a dik gag your face/ sasha grey go and google it//

    that verse was nothin you must be unlucky b/
    better duck and leave/i came to shame you publicly/
    smash you hard enough to make my knuckles bleed I buck emcees/
    you a kid a punk snot nosed, Chuck E cheese/a play toy Mickey D's/
    I stay poised breaking knees till playboys rest in peace/
    make noise the best is me/ My stocks up invest in me/
    or get your vest on/hot shells is the recipe/
    not the pasta kind/log off you cant match these thoughts of mine/
    cant smell what Im cookin like The Rock don't even stop to try/
    cant taste it either dawg/ I clean up, these pots are dry/
    I cant be touched/ leave you crushed and rob you blind/
    i'll leave you SENSELESS, no really re read the last few lines/
    smash your spine/ clap the nine and leave you screamin why/
    stand over you and laugh until your last breath like im killin time/
    sound angry really though I'm feelin fine I chill and dine/
    with the illest dime fish with lime while she sippin wine//
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    Alright.

    No hesitance, flow doper than
    folk choking in smoke sentances
    soaked cos your boats got dd

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    Haha my bad shitty mother****ing galaxy pocket

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    Lets resume,

    You pests get fumed with my hectic groove,
    The mist infects your mood
    The mr with the meds but lest ya doomed.
    Im just reflecting dude...
    beams of intent invent your tonb
    Here gents i just sent it through,
    Kickin chicken heads with expensive shoes.
    That sentances was cute,
    I silence it , your spent , hence your lines in a loop
    Unwind, while i depict the ****in sickest style ever used
    Im smiling at you ,
    Now why did you lose?
    My thoughts decided
    to rep these spiders which
    Then tied up your shoes
    Ya trippin

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    Default yo pink date

    Some hommies are fake,human
    faces,their hearts are SNAKES......//
    It time to expose them,4their silly
    MISTAKES.......//
    Since i beat em,he relates me to
    "KING DRAKE".....//
    Hommie in disguise,weak heart lyk
    are "DAME" (woman)....//
    Nah am back hommie,u wonder,
    how did i CAME?....hahaha//
    Save this name,on yo phone,wid
    yo "FAKE FACE"....//
    hahaha!
    By the time u know me,i'll gat yo
    name DEFAME.....//
    YO good though,but u loose,
    why get me outta this LANE.....//
    Why quit me hommie? u know, are
    gat love 4dis GAME.....//
    In this page are gat love,for only
    few NAMES**(robmac
    JAN,krate ,JUSTIN, and
    other few NAMES......//
    YO good,but am enough,nah am
    back to RECLAIM.....//

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    Default for *****s,in da block

    am the only rapper that spit this
    **** in vanacular/if you cant see am
    dope you need some bonacular/
    nw they call me jesus becoz i spit
    wisdom and grant miracle/i came
    here to drop bomb no panic am
    not a terrorist/ yoo WAC rappers should stop
    making fake gangstar SHEET....they
    gat no punchlines when its kam to
    making HEAT.....am reping my
    hood yoo every time ah jump on d
    BEAT.....
    clean n simple don't say slosh on
    mah POST....it wount be luved in d
    video fun that we will be
    HOAST......so take ur eyes up d sun
    nd see who's d GHOST....
    lots of rap battles ah already
    WON.. .. coz all ah do is win nd u
    do is WRONG...Am an hip pop icon
    nd am standing too STRONG....aiii

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    Default 1 then bed

    since the target is too easy
    man im keeping it general,
    also the commander said the genre was too much for his pencil.
    the upper level,
    welcome,
    this **** done busted a stencil,
    also thought to say punt ya temple ,**** it lust is is essential.


    your form is nautious, cautious cos eerie forces scortch your fortess,
    hearing voices?
    its the noise of choices gettin
    toyed with, in your subconscious.

    **** thats nonsense. hahaha

    bye bro,

    gna sip a milo n get these three eyes closed

    a sleegy fly owe with 6 gs of the cheese,
    to feck with the sty-ill

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