Villanelle 3: Clearville.

Clarity is when you know
The inner road,yours to take
a very fine line to tow

Where ignorance settles to grow
Wisdom itself dares to shake
Clarity is when you know

Seeing the world through a window
A plethora of choices to make
A very fine line to tow

The day checks to a slow
A bared mind in its wake
Clarity is when you know

What makes the heart flow?
Emotions,whirlpool like a lake
A very fine line to tow

Knowledge comes and stays with a glow
Now robust, formerly as a rake
Clarity is when you know
A very fine line to tow.

P.S I welcome constructive criticism, please feel free to express your opinions. Thank you.

Cool, I am not very familiar with Villanelle, but I know it can be hard to convey it into something natural that does not halt itself. But I think you did a good job here and I enjoyed it for what it is

Wasn't familiar with villanelles myself until about 2yrs ago, i started writing them because, as you said, it's a bit difficult to convey a message while writing within borders which you must adhere to. It's a little challenge i took up.

Cool cool, I will consider it myself sometime. Seems very interesting, and it is a challenge to face!

This is cool!I almost feel like getting towed.

Thanks Doug, you're gifted, words never desert you, i think.

Hi! I am especially fond of the clear line of thoughts here, Curiosity I find this one therefore a true little oasis in a desert.
Thanks a lot!

Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat

Thanks Doug, you're gifted, words never desert you, i think.

Sometimes I have to eat my words,but never for dessert!

Originally Posted by amaryn

Hi! I am especially fond of the clear line of thoughts here, Curiosity I find this one therefore a true little oasis in a desert.
Thanks a lot!

Thanks for the comments, it shows you took your time to read through. Very refreshing indeed(pun unintended)
& you're the 1st to call me "Curiosity", i like it better (Others just call me "Cat")

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Sometimes I have to eat my words,but never for dessert!

That is it! Can you just see this T-shirt on me? I'll let you choose the colour.

Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat

Thanks for the comments, it shows you took your time to read through. Very refreshing indeed(pun unintended)
& you're the 1st to call me "Curiosity", i like it better (Others just call me "Cat")

Alors, je t'appelle comme ca, d'accord?

Originally Posted by amaryn

Alors, je t'appelle comme ca, d'accord?

D'accord. Vous etes francaise?