Up The Mountains.

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    I woke up with a start
    drenched in the light of the sun
    Stepping unto uncharted territory
    foraging for the right equipment
    The path to tread,
    a looming mystery.
    My very next step,
    a conundrum.
    My confusion palpable
    at the labyrithine course before me
    then i espied
    my compass,
    your radiating smile.
     
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    Excellent, this was very good IMO. It served its small purpose, and fulfilled it flawlessly. Welcome to allthelyrics forum!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eccer View Post
    Excellent, this was very good IMO. It served its small purpose, and fulfilled it flawlessly. Welcome to allthelyrics forum!
    Thanks for the comments, pls keep them coming. Well said Eccer, but i think people prefer long poems.
     
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    The length inspired my Azure Eyes poem.you definitely have your own style!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    The length inspired my Azure Eyes poem.you definitely have your own style!
    Doug, thanks for the acknowledgement. & i think it's a chain, 'Azure eyes' got me thinking about a series of short descriptive lines...
     
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    sure, Curiosity, odd you say people prefer long poems; I disagree- this little jewel of yours proves you wrong per sť

    "then I espied my compass, your radiating smile"
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    sure, Curiosity, odd you say people prefer long poems; I disagree- this little jewel of yours proves you wrong per sť

    "then I espied my compass, your radiating smile"
    Thanks for believing in these lines' ability to communicate... Is that the line you like?
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    The length inspired my Azure Eyes poem.you definitely have your own style!
    No, Dougg. You have a definitive style of your own. Always refreshing to view your work.

    (Are you also an instrumentalist?) Just curious
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    No, Dougg. You have a definitive style of your own. Always refreshing to view your work.

    (Are you also an instrumentalist?) Just curious
    I've played Drums my entire life.When I was a child I used to "bounce"my head on my pillow to go to sleep.I'm always aware of the "beat"in anything I do.I'm very concisious of rhythm in life itself.
     
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    Curiosity! How nice to see you! I was getting worried daily life got totally hold of you

    @Doug: I strongly can feel like you, though I play guitar and sing. Without rhythm (a whole scale of them) it's impossible to play, compose, write lyrics.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    Curiosity! How nice to see you! I was getting worried daily life got totally hold of you

    @Doug: I strongly can feel like you, though I play guitar and sing. Without rhythm (a whole scale of them) it's impossible to play, compose, write lyrics.

    Hugs for both of you...so glad to read from you.
     
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    I sure want to learn to play one or two instruments... very interested
     
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    Pick up a stick.......pound on any surface.........you are now a drummer!
     
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    Drumming is not as easy as it looks, & more often than not, the drummer makes the band.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    Drumming is not as easy as it looks, & more often than not, the drummer makes the band.
    I should have know that I couldn't get that pass you!If you got a good drummer,even a mediocre band sounds good.If you have a great drummer,it makes a good band sound great!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    I should have know that I couldn't get that pass you!If you got a good drummer,even a mediocre band sounds good.If you have a great drummer,it makes a good band sound great!
    Now all i need is a great drummer -voila! I'll go platinum.(hopefully0