I Visit Me

I have been busy and going through some heavy stuff lately and I have had writers block. I have a tune in mind for this but it is a very rough 1st draft. Any comments would be welcome.




Deep down within my soul
as far as I can go;
I visit me,
the me that's real.

Somewhere in my heart
in a part not torn apart
I visit me,
where I still feel.

I visit me,
the me you don't see.

Buried deep within my mind,
in a place hard to find,
I visit me,
where hope still lives.

At the core of my being,
where I bottle everything,
I visit me,
the me that still forgives.

I visit me,
the me you don't see.

Someday I may show myself,
but first I must be healed.
What scares me
Is what me
there'll be
by the time I am revealed.

Deep down within my soul
as far as I can go,
I visit me;
the me that's real.

I visit me
I visit me

© L. James Tanner

It reads more poem that song.I hope when you visit you,you're okay.

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

I reads more poem that song.I hope when you visit you,you're okay.

I agree, sure reads like a poem...lol@ the 2nd statement.

It may read like a poem, but I wrote it with a tune in mind. Kinda a slow country/alt country/ song.

Well written. Seriously its good.

Original approach of soulsearching. I liked what I read and I am sure Groucho Marx would say the same,lol

Country? No way; sorry to say, but this I'd like to sing in melodious rockstyle, but then again me is me......