'I'm missing you'

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  1. Wilson said:

    Default 'I'm missing you'

    (VERSE 1)

    It has remained cold
    since you've been gone
    and still have no clue
    hot I'm to hold on
    it's hard to take back all words I said
    if I could I'd just press reset.

    Whenever you called I
    was there in a tik tok
    in a storm or not coz you were the only one I got
    now you left me on my own
    will I ever make it? I don't know.

    HOOK;

    The angel I need,you are one of a kind
    no matter what happens,you'll still be on my mind.

    {CHORUS}

    I love you so big you
    know it's true
    I keep thinking of you
    and every thing we do
    baby please don't walk away
    we can start again.

    I can't find no word to show you are my world
    my life and happiness
    you are my girl
    I wonna break this wall between us
    coz I'm missing you.

    (VERSE 2)

    Spending my days rewinding our cute memories
    in my dreams you are the one I see
    I'll never give up,always stick around
    even when the skies are falling down.

    We used to be cool now it's all a fight
    wonna turn back time and make things alright
    I'm complete
    coz you're all I have
    Wish you'd go running back in my arms.

    BRIDGE;

    Don't let what we had go down in the drain
    all our tears would be washed in the rain
    can't you see with no you I can never be
    you and me we are
    a reality.

    (c) 2013 WILSON GITAU KINYUA.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Once you change "hot"to "how"(4th line) you'll have written another simple R&B song in the Motown Sound Tradition!You're on a tear,Im pleased to say!
     
  3. Wilson said:

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    Yeah,that was a typing error.I'm sorry..Was supposed to be 'How'..hehe.Thanks bro for the corection.:-)..And for the comment too.
     
  4. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Great song!! I really liked it.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  5. Wilson said:

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    Wow.Thanks too.I appreciate.
     
  6. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    Yeah, Wilson, really Tamla Motown lyrics Doug already recognized the R&B, I'd even take it the Motown way.