Scorpions and Butterflies

Thread: Scorpions and Butterflies

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    feel the sting
    then the brush of wings
    against your skin..... x3

    there are scorpions in your smile
    and i wonder how,
    i ever did see, the beauty in your
    face, then i remember...
    You've got something nobody else has
    it sets you apart, makes you unique.
    this subtle fact made me look back
    and realize deep inside... all i ever wanted was you.

    venom in veins
    and air on your face
    a beautiful state...x3

    there are butterflies in your eyes
    now i can see why,
    i was captivated, encapsulated
    with your face, then i recall...
    There's a darker side to you that terrifies me
    you're a sleeping tiger ready to strike
    this can't be right
    this is my plight
    no matter what i do... i cannot escape from you.

    feel the sting
    then the brush of wings
    against your skin
    venom in veins
    and air on your face
    a beautiful state
    SCORPIONS!!!
    BUTTERFLIES!!!
    SCORPIONS!!!
    BUTTERFLIES!!!
    Last edited by Tomatomic; 03-30-2013 at 03:26 PM.
     
  2. LooknGlass said:

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    Good stuff man, very good write. Title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed. Keep up the good work!
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    I naturally thought of "O full of scorpions is my mind" from Shakespeare's MacBeth.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Two-in-Row!This is another,less angry,more relatable song.Good work Atomic One!
     
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    curiosity_kills_the_cat said:

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    Never-ending metamorphosis...hmm.

    "there are scorpions in your smile"(very imaginative)
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Surprising strike: butterflies usually prefer the stomach I like to be surprised