The Lost Note

The Lost Note

Sometimes, it just doesnt feel right
you overlook that one little thing
the one you're blinded by, day and night.

Sometimes, that missing piece
in this puzzle unsolved
is all that you need to find.

Somehow, its still on your mind
You're one,yet incomplete
No matter how much you tried,over and again.

It mocks you, time after time
The uneasiness, always there contemplating
Desperate to find that missing piece, you're at a dead end.

But it had always been there with you.
The secret of it all. The lost note.

This has a very.........unique feel to it.Do you sing this or recite it;poem style?If this is to be sung,I'd think about possibly repeating one of the stanzas creating a chorus.Of course,it isn't always necessary(Honesty)but it makes it "appear"more like a song.I like what you wrote,I'd like to figure out how it would be sung.

I recited this. That's the main issue. Its very difficult to sing it. Will try and figure out a way though. And I appreciate that you liked it!!

Why didn't you post it on the Poetrty Site?Just wondering.

Be careful of all those poetry hawks.