my life

Thread: my life

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    this is my life;
    this is how i live it
    don't give a **** about how it looks.
    i walk my way, talk my way
    it's every man for himself everyday.
    i made my choice;
    make yours too
    put it my brain till it starts to blow.
    the fire in my eyes keeps me a live
    there's a phoenix in my heart!

    i'm walking on the moon;
    soaring so high
    when it gets past noon
    i make it start, all over again
    now there's no time to waste
    so i ignore those nit-picking scumbags
    i made my peace, now watch me grow...

    **** it... this is my life x6
    WATCH ME LIVING!!!

    no such thing;
    nor will there ever be
    as a bad decision to break my mind.
    i made em' swift, make your soon
    no direction, a walk so ****ing cruel
    do as you choose;
    no second thoughts
    it takes hard cash to please the heart
    every little A keeps the hate at bay
    i'm stronger than a God!

    i'm floating in the storm
    tripping out
    from the dusk till the dawn
    now it starts, all over again
    running straight for the gold
    passing all the drop outs;
    choke on my dust
    i'm so strong, GOLIATH!!

    **** it... this is my life x6
    WATCH ME LIVE A LIE!!!

    so do i do what i do
    because i'm all alone
    no-one to confide in
    or am i just cold
    is that your excuse
    for the way i am
    don't try to justify
    what you can't stand
    make your law
    police what i do
    take away my soul
    tough luck *****....

    **** it.... this is my life x4
    IT'S MY LIFE TO LEAD!!!!!!!!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Explosive confession about savoir vivre (know how to live-french way of expressing themselves),lol
    Great! Straight forward.
    When it comes to swearing, you know the stars twinkle, so better avoid them: there are way better
    words to express /underline your excellentwriting here!
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Finally,a song that I can Comment on!This is good stuff Atomic One!Not as "preachy"as some of your other songs,not as angry,so relatable to me.Just good Rock and Roll,with a capital "R"!If it rocks,I like it,if it rolls,even better.This does both,Bravo!
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Good for you. The world steps aside for the man who knows who he is and what he wants.
     
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    JJCory3 said:

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    Love the emotion! Good work.
     
  6. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    Tomatomic A hot version of a modern "protest song". Welldone and worth taking serious. Keep going!!