For You

The heaves and sighs
The pros and cons
passion and mission blending
'hot' and hearts melting
wills yielding
I don't know what
but i feel it.
I can't tame it
...can't name it
...can't claim it.
But i feel it
It's the same
slippery as an eel
elusive as a unicorn
What i feel
For you.


P.S: I'd always felt there could be a better title for this. Any cool suggestion? Thanks for your sincere comments.
Yours.

You make make me think (Ouch!)with your words!I like this;a lot!Title Sugeston:Slippery As An Eel!

Thanks for the suggestion Dougg,

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

You make make me think (Ouch!)with your words!I like this;a lot!Title
:Slippery As An Eel!

@Dougg: How do i effect a title change here? C'est possible?

Thanks.(xtra 'g' not a mistake)

Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat

@Dougg: How do i effect a title change here? C'est possible?

Thanks.(xtra 'g' not a mistake)

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By the way,I started Emailing all your poetry to my Bob Marley fan sister.I'll let you know what she thinks.

Curiosity, I'd go for "Untamable me" What do ya say,lol?

Originally Posted by amaryn

Curiosity, I'd go for "Untamable me" What do ya say,lol?

Is That how you really feel? "Untamable"

Good to be back.
Thanks Amaryn.

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

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By the way,I started Emailing all your poetry to my Bob Marley fan sister.I'll let you know what she thinks.

Thanks a lot. It means a lot to me. Still hope to make it to one of them Tribute concerts. She must be cool, i know.

Can't name it, can't claim it, can't fake it...

Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat

Can't name it, can't claim it, can't fake it...

But can you shake it!