Paul Oakley - Let it Rain

Singable translation wanted, please, not just a literal one. Thank you, Donna

We have prayed that you would have mercy;
We believe from heaven You've heard.
Heal our land, so dry and so thirsty;
We have strayed so far from You, Lord.
Your cloud appeared on the horizon,
Small as a man's hand.
But now You're near,
Filling our vision,
Pour out Your Spirit again.

I felt the touch of Your wind on my face:
I feel the first drops of rain.

Let it rain, let it rain.
I will not be the same.
Let it rain, rain on me.
Let it pour down on me,
Let it rain.

Let it rain, let it rain,
Let it rain, let it rain on me.
Let it rain, let it rain,
Let it rain.

We have prayed that you would have mercy;
Hemos orado para que usted tenga misericordia

We believe from heaven You've heard.
Creemos que desde el cielo Usted "nos" ha oído

Heal our land, so dry and so thirsty;
¡Sane nuestra tierra! , tan seca y tan sedienta

We have strayed so far from You, Lord.
Nos hemos alejado tanto de Ti, Señor.

Your cloud appeared on the horizon,
Su nube apareció en el horizonte,

Small as a man's hand.
Pequeña como la mano de un hombre.

But now You're near,
Pero ahora está cerca,

Filling our vision,
Llenando nuestra visión,

Pour out Your Spirit again.
¡Derrame tu Espíritu otra vez

I felt the touch of Your wind on my face:
Sentí el toque de tu viento en mi cara

I feel the first drops of rain.
Siento las primeras gotas de lluvia.

Let it rain, let it rain.
Haz llover, Haz llover "¡Que llueva"

I will not be the same.
No voy a ser el mismo.

Let it rain, rain on me.
Haz llover "¡Que llueva", llover sobre mi "llueva sobre mi"

Let it pour down on me,
Que caiga un chaparrón

Let it rain.
Haz llover "¡Que llueva"


If you're looking for a song to sing then this one is close enough....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1F2Fn19kyX4

An observation for English speakers, with permission: you can address someone in a informal way: with "tu" (adjective), "tú" (pronoun); or formal: "su" (adj.), "usted" (pron.):

Pour out Your Spirit again.
¡Derrame tu Espíritu otra vez
If you use "tu", you must say "derrama". But you can say "Derrame su espíritu".

Let it rain, let it rain.
Haz llover, Haz llover "¡Que llueva"
With "usted": "Haga llover".

she requested a singable translation .... I am christian and we sing songs similar to this one... so if I may:

Originally Posted by lovelyaltagracia

We have prayed that you would have mercy;
Hemos orado para que tengas misericordia

We believe from heaven You've heard.
Creemos que desde el cielo nos escuchas

Heal our land, so dry and so thirsty;
¡Sana nuestra tierra!, tan seca y tan sedienta

We have strayed so far from You, Lord.
Nos hemos alejado tanto de Ti, Señor.

Your cloud appeared on the horizon,
Tú nube apareció en el horizonte,

Small as a man's hand.
Pequeña como la mano de un hombre.

But now You're near,
Pero ahora está cerca,

Filling our vision,
Llenando nuestra visión,

Pour out Your Spirit again.
¡Derrama tu Espíritu otra vez

I felt the touch of Your wind on my face:
Sentí el toque de tu viento en mi cara

I feel the first drops of rain.
Siento las primeras gotas de lluvia.

Let it rain, let it rain.
Haz llover, Haz llover

I will not be the same.
No voy a ser el mismo. (or No voy a ser igual)

Let it rain, rain on me.
Haz llover, llover sobre mi

Let it pour down on me,
Que se vierta sobre mí

Let it rain.
Haz llover